@ Jiska thanks man preciate it, will do foreal and for ur piece man only thing i can really see id change is maybe givn ur M a little more room to flow,

 

Jiska man, you can colour really well but your letters still need some focused attention. Some o the unnecessary cuts and extensions could go.

Flocka, drop most of the bends and extensions and work on consistent bars and a basic flow, every one of those letters is hurting. Also you need to improve your line work, it may help the thicken your lines a bit by going over them more than once.

 

crits?

 

Yeah I didn't like the way I did the k. D does need to get better, thanks !
@sepmer is it that bad to where I gotta go back to bars? It's sloppy and done with a fine liner, my letters have structure somewhat. At least I think so, I'll take your word for it and hit the books some more

 

Looks a lot better, that little change makes a difference

 

C'ments are welcome: just played arround bit with colors. Need to work on straight lines, beter flows as I see myself already.

 

Tried animating, too bad yo can't animate on walls..

 

I think it would look a lot better without those 2 arrows, those are not doing any good for the whole piece in my opinion

 

damn belt those are fucking sick dude

nice page so far

Chepter, I think u got potential just keep messing with simples and making all your bars consistent and what not, keep at it man

 

Fred I like your characters but you gotta work on dem letta's too no joke but good way you are on

 

How about this? I was doing too many throws and tags i didnt focus on pieces so here it is... LOOK AT MAH COEP 2 TAG i think its an original name and i chose 2 because everyone writes 1 so it became mainstream GIMME UR PAINT TOY OR ILL SHOOT YOU

 

Coep2, cope2...yep I see no similarity. Haha nah Im jus fucking with you nig, the pice looks okay, some shit on it needs to get cleaned up, and that hand needs a lot of work, use a marker.

 

Thxs guys for the reply. Will keep trying.

 

Geen probleem, je letters en je lijnen zien er vrij strak uit, dus je bent al een aardig eind op weg

 

fred, whut you use to make that?

 

Adobe flash pro CS6

Also, is my lettering still off much? Here I was thinking I was making progress, when all of a sudden this 'mefiso' guy tells me I'm lacking.

 

Fred this aint the street, it doesnt matter how well known u are on the internet, I was just sayin they could be better, no offense, but if you were if you were making progress then I didnt mean it.

 

Fred, it's a nice simple, you have bars pretty much down. Now is time to gradually add some funk, not through extensions at first but through bends and slight leans to letter, maybe a few little details just to ease into a style. You've progressed a lot but there's still a long way to go. I understand what mefisto was saying because it is after still a simple.

 

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