the letters are aight but I can understand you were a little more attentive to the character, right? anyways, the char animated looks kinda superb imho./

 

bump for crits

bible belt- i mad dig your throws, teach me?
vapik- mess around with your letters, don't just do the same thing everytime with different colours.

 

quick bus sketch, any crits?

 

x

 

Exchange for Zossqo (Zoss), had a lot of trouble with his name.
Crits are welcome

 

x

 

finished the outline of it, sorry about the shitty pic

 

^ looks good just dont like the k

 

Thanks dog. And I know, Im pretty bad at k's. I think I might
Take the k off, I prefer four letter names anyway.

 

Try VAPE? Not sure if any writer writes that already

 

Or go back to your Vapid

 

Haha I didn't like the D either really. And it sounds like someone already writes vape, idk that just sounds taken. I'll check it out though.

 

Love your style vapid666 (Y)

 

vapik, take the part of the k that goes horizontal and then the leg and push it more upwards, i think itll look better.

 

Haha that confused me slightly but I think I know what you mean

 

Dude the only way you'll get good at letters is if you keep trying, Vapik is sick ! I hated k's now I kinda got the hang of em after practice

 

Hey guys! I feel like this is my style, I like it, I shud have used a better ruler (i used another pencil as a ruler) Any comments???

 

Keep up with simples pples looking good, that pencil sketch vapik is my fav thing iv seen i draw on here, work on that k and keep messing with them bars but keep it simple
Keep it up eerybuddy

 

A quick one