Here's another SUBBO... this time.. WORMS! I'm pretty bummed out about the spacing of the last B and O... oh well
Dreams, good to see u using bars but try using less bends and stuff right now, simplify it a tad bit but just keep working at it man! belt thats sick per usual, gracefull grime nice worms subo, that shadow u have under the letters is dope 2 big K, that E....soooo sick, keep it up dude mefisto, its good ur using bars but simplify it down for now, dont try to force the style, just keep bangin out simples on simples and style will come and crits on these would be helpful and appreciated
@Perms thank you for the crits, your drawings are good but on the first one I dont like the square thing, also on your pics the first half on the M looks much like an N so it made me to think the other part is the extension of the curve. Also I think you should pay attention on the width of lines. On the second I like the coloring, finish it, but I think those lines around the piece look distracting and unnecesarry, i think you should have worked more on the third one, or at least color the shadows, the P looks like an S to me, so I think the curve is too big keep up
Subbo - that's a cool idea man, keep doing simple stuff like that and you'll progress fast. Also, I would go with SUBO instead of SUBBO Turban - Your J's look a lot like P's, so maybe put the curve on the other side or just don't bend it as much. Also for the colored one the S kinda looks like an O because of the connection to the M. Are those all freestyles though? Bottom page Bump
thanks EWl i appreciate the crits man, bottom picutre is only free style as u can tell cuz it looks pretty shitty lol, iv been doing free hand drawings of the top 2 but obviously dont turn out as clean...not that those there r that clean anyways but u get wat im saying synone summed it up, its sick man those tearing drips and drips in the letters are fire, are u going to add 3d or color or anything?
Chur is like a greeting or thank you in our country. I don't think he realizes that not everyone know our slang (probably a kid)
I don't think you even know the meaning of the word, it's like agreeing, like "Bro you needa add more colours" "Churr" (Probably a kid) ahaha. Funny guy, i couldn't care less if they don't understand.
Flow could use some work but the letters are fine as far as I can see, just practice like fuck and you'll get there eventualy Super quick shit, got carried away and a few things got a bit hectic Quickie for the aspex battle,