id say it would look cleaner without the lines continuing on the top of the I and on the K if ya know what i mean
@BazookaTooth yeah I feel ya homie. I kind of disagree and like the lines on the i, but I def see your point on the K. thanks dog, Ill keep on sketchin
yea i was just saying the top piece of the I how it continues kinda makes it looks off but i dig the bottom lines that continue on the I
Innercity: I think you should work on making your letters less wobbly and better structured first before messing with arrows, it's boaring but it pays of in the end. Vapik: I tend to agree with bazooka I like the lines on the bottom of the I not so much on the top. Ralpmet: not much to say, simple but clean...good stuff! Making something for my friends little boy, rough sketch still have to clean up the 3d and thinking about putting a char on the top right...critz? Cecilio Junior [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/771/z4pe.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us
@poepomhoog1:thnx. Like your style on that one. I think the first C is to much of a T as it is now. Maybe shorten the left part a little bit. And the J looks a bit weird to me
thanx and yeah didn't really like te J myself, I think I'm just going to redo it. I'm going to shorten the c, good tip.
He just turned 8 so still a little kid. Not that good at characters so it won't be a great char but I'll give it a good attempt. Thanx for the feedback.
Realy just working on straights because my feeble toy mind wrecks any attempts at anything more complicated than a straight line. Right on or bogus go-kill-yourself?
@eats its bogus go kill yourself. NOW! haha but nah nig its good. try to take better pics, its hard to see most of those, but its coming along. exchange with Nostik and just a quick sketch, I started to color it and realized a little late that there was no hope of finishing.... crits on both are appreciated
@Eats those look great to be honest, but you need better pictures you dig? Although I like what you have came up with so far
Not a big fan of the vapik, those swirly things and the a in general throw it off, also ditch the extension on the v it makes it look like a fucked up y. That nostrik is coming along nicely though, ever though of different flows? Quick shits for the blue battle, May or may not use this sketch.
vapik deep in your soul you do know that the V looks like a Y or something like that and messes up the flow then why are you doing it?