Been absent from these forums for a while now.. Got some time opened up and I thought I would get back into graffiti. Hasn't stopped thinking about it to be honest.

Anyways, been trying to get a throwie down. Crits would be appreciated

 

Mock I like the k you should try to make the other letters match

 

@ICR, that second one's good if you fix the S
@Mr. November you've got the basic idea down just begin to twist the letters so the flow quicker for you and develope thier own unique style
@Vapik, your shits good enough, start hitting streets

 

@apone haha thanks, and I do go out sometimes, just not to often. I'll post up next time I paint one, I think Im going tonight.

 

The third throw is one I'm practicing

 

I like what you're doing with your N and your O is fine, but your N overshadows your S quite a bit. I think that if you made your S a lot more pronounced it would be better.

I'm not necessarily a fan of the S on the last one.

 

Yeah the S on the last one is what I'm working on the most

 

Make it again duude S is way too small make it as seeable as the O, I really like that N

 

come up with a new S, look at other writers Ss n work off those but yours aint great right now

 

if anything the top of the S should lean back and not forward like that. the bottom one looks like a U for petes sake haha.

 

I kinda fucked the N up on both of them but whaaatever
crits plz

 

watch state your name ^^^^

all they do is trowwies just watch it and youll know wat your doing wrong cuz at the moment i dont know were to begin to help you homie

 

Sound take the advices we gave to you ,make simple pieces, then come back and we will help!

 

and you need to go a lot bigger cuz you arent gonna be able to make a sharpie or whatever kinda marker that is work. or get a gel pen thatll work up close they rarely bleed on correct paper.

 

just some quick throwies. a little sloppy


woops, it's upside down for some reason but whatever you get it

 

Some throws

 

belt that trow homie shits tight keep them up
nos drop the balls on the bottom of your n its begingin to look like 2 dicks
like make it simpler n liek the o and s nice and simple