had a brain fart on the mouth of the throw kinda bite belt a lil sorry bro and thanks your name here i appreciate it
@Jesr The style is unique, and props for that. The only issues I see are the S and the flowing line at the top. The bottom half of the S needs to be adjusted for it to look like an S. As for the line, scrap it. I think you could have divided letters in this style and it'd be a banger.
I forgot to put the purple in for the bottom of the S. I'm trying to think how to do them separately.
I know my throwies need work, so here is one that I submitted for the Rice battle (Crits/suggestions):
@Dreams Your E looks like a C. The dot for the I doesn't need the line, makes it look less like an I. The letters overall dont have a style or flow to them. Just work on getting more creative.
@Nos If you're going to keep the hole in the O I feel like your N and S need to have a hole, or spacing to keep a similar style. The N and S are also fairly basic, try expanding on your style dude.
I forgot the line in the E....Thatnx for spotting that bro. Yeah, my Throws and Handstyles need alot of work; thinking of leaving the piecing for a while and working on those.
@Dreams I've seen your pieces and you rock BANGERS dude. Just work on applying that same ability to your throws. I know you're than capable.