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@Exile bottom half of the top picture looks alright.

 

Style crit?

 

Belts I see you're still kickin that dope shit. Been forever since I've been on BS. I've been out writing and actually learning some shit, trying to learn to piece or something other than throwies and characs.

 

got passed over bye preacher man there but heres your shit belt ill get on a narlyer one more satanic and grimey

 

so, check it, I have difficulty with the TRO part of DESTRO, and I need some crits/advice about it.

 

^ nice stuff bro

 

not quite done with this guy, crits?

 

if that's his brain coming out of the top bowl of it then you just gotta figure out something else that's gonna work as a brain. everything else is cool tho. some artsy fartsy shit.

 

naw it's hair, I ust didn't fill it.

 

try to make brains next time might look better

 

Some shit, tryna put in more work on my blank black book

 

you need to slim out the top and botom of your s and make the middle fatter

 

@biblebeltbangerz love that style, have a look at eject's work from ep
@DZEDOZER looks mental, agree with the brain idea
@innercityrebel I'd of left the spacing in the o similar to rest, not bad though.


Don't like the s, what you think?

 

Cannis try to clean it up a bit and alot of those extentions dont work

 

Some of you people have got to learn that, when it comes to extensions, a lot of the time less is more.

 

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