edge - looks really clean good job, solid letters and nice fill Inner - I'd lose the bubbles protruding from the letters to be honest, keep at it tho low quality webcam pic as per usual
Dude it would be an amazing piece but 2 thing I dont like 1. The bold black outline. It might look good but they way you made it: it looks like it is not a consistent line, you pulled a line stopped, pulled again, or you might pulled the line slowly. But I know how badly you can mess up your piece by messing up the outline with the marker. 2.r could be taller
smoke that s is getting there with the thickness in a the middle just a lil more work and youll have it down
The messed up outlines are the failed drop shadows :/ Trust me I know they're bad Also thanks for the tip about the R I notice it does look shorter
cheers for the crit i know what you mean about the middle bar of the S but that's always how i've done them, personally i like having a thin middle next post i'll do it thicker anyway haha
word gemer and junglitz thanks and jung that black and grey is fucking nasty... nice letter style and the portrait is fucking prime you should try to put some little smokey wisps or something to tie em together a little
@daze; love the work clean lines and awesome fill @innercity: try drawing in the middle of the book and not on the seam, id loose the bubble blowout at the bottom and work on those first 2 letters. @smoke; the portrait is dope though id added in some heavy lines at certain spots like by the respirator and some parts of the hat. it might look more together and less like 2 pieces if you placed smoke just barely over the portrait and like someone said above adding in sme smoke wisps will help bring the two together nicely. @hero; the H is great the e leaves alot to be desired though id reshape the bottom and loose the flare. also maybe instead of having the e cut into the R why not have the bottom of the e swing behind the r to help give a little depth. id reshape the r a bit and change the angle, at its current angle you could extend the leg all you wnat but its only going into a point, itll seem longer when drawing but teh perspective make sit look tweaked to the far back leaving you in the same spot as now, with a R that lacks a leg. the O is nice, im a fan of making the inner circle of the O alot smaller then it would be normally. now time to get soem of my work up here, i need the criticism
zossqo - if you get that style nailed it'll look sooo sick haha, the h r and o are good, e needs tweaking a bit i think cheers for the crits, another one i did today (ignore all that shit coming out of the O, got a bit carried away)