Lemme know whatchu think

 

Lines are choppy cuz I used a paint marker. That shit is HARD to control, better with pencil...

 

Phree this dudes obviously just gunna troll shit until someone gives him a positive crit, fuck it

 

you're bad

 

Lol this ain't no video game

 

some random stickers, throwies and characters. feedback?

 

what is your word, pots? your little character is cool especially the eyes are done well, you may just want to outline the top left with white or maybe red instead of just the black line around it.

letters could use a little definition, like for the P, try drawing one with a top part like on the one the green sticker, and the bottom part more like the one on the blue sticker
also, you usually dont want to use the same color as the outline for your shine lines/dots

 

Thanks, Im still trying to get down my throwie and stuff. ill get working on it

 

Hey I didn't hear any advice or critz from you guys, did you see my picture?

 

Line work is choppy and thicker in some places, its because I used a paint marker. Paint markers are really hard to control, better with pencil!

 

work on your letter structure?

 

Some of the first stickers I had done with my current character concept. Need a larger selection of colors to add more personality to them.

 

Best one is orange. Work on your tongues. Need more depth. Eyes are FAR FAR too simple. Add more flair to them and make them pop. The teeth are too weak. Dashes are too thick. Maybe add more wrinkles. It's not the colors, its just the characters that need work. They look like something I would see in clipart for goofy faces, thats not a compliment.

Oh, I made this doodle. Lemme know what you think.

 

I used an ultra skinny normal sharpie, thats why lines are fuzzy

 

current character concept

~ Nice use of alliteration man

 

sophlife ignore that shit, you got some decent simple faces, just try to make your lines a little straighter (and cut em straighter). and you may want to use a dark red or black for a circle in the back of the mouth

what kind of stickers are those on?

 

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carved a stamp of the church design, needs some clean up but heres the first few i tried out

 

Strongman - thanks for the advice, I've gotten a lot better at the tongues since then. And the wider selection of colors would be to add things to them like I did on these two, But the eyes and teeth are meant to be simple, but I'll play around with other styles, and I stopped using the dashes.

EDGEx585 - thanks, the paint markers I have tend to stick to the paper, and I naturally have shaky hands so I'm working on cleaning up my lines, and I'll try the throat hole in some sketches, but I've only got one shade of red for stickers. And they're half page UPS stickers, so they're a decent size. And what did you carve the stamp out of? cause thats dope