cuz i dont get crits

you can do that ??

here some thing new a quickie

 

Keeping shit more simple.

 

Elbo i think you should get the letters down before going for mad fills.

Any crits guys, 2 quick ones

 

Zephyr

 

i think you need to get your letters down b4 you use a pen or a marker man
it will help you conserve paper use bars drop then things on the top of all your letters and your extensions because you don't look like you have the concept locked in

 

quick simple, not been drawing much the last week or so

 

This for me or Opte?

 

opte

but you need to work on bars as well my friend work on makeing all your letters the same size and pattern try KEY BOARD LETTERS LIKE SO CHIVE

 

Bayenor stop doing that ugly fucking style, damnit.

 

i honestly like bays style before he adds fills, but i must say sometime you go a bit far.

 

I dont understand why you're bagging on Elbow's style, its unique and if he masters it odds are it'll be killing other styles in his area. Let him do his thing.

@Chive Practice bars over and over again.

@Smok work on something that isn't recycled dude. Feel like im seeing the same piece time after time again. You have the potential to drop dope ass pieces its just the fact that you dont push yourself to do so.

@Elbow Thats the weakest letters I've seen yet, don't take that the wrong way cause Im fairly sure its because you rushed it. Your style is fresh dude, just keep working at it. That E in your Elbow handstyle is fire dude.

@Opte your letters are pretty close to impossible to read lol Idk if its just cause the picture is turned or what be I cant make out a single letter

 

Handsltye is shit like always, been off my game recently and I could use crits

 

@Devek Try to keep your bars and overall size of the letters the same. It'll go a long way, however the letters dont look horrible. Could just use a little work, dope theme idea though

 

kringe- u do a hollow that clean j.s with no pencil str8 pen
and thanks grabs iv been trying to make my grime better and better but to be honestly its not grime really its more like fat people arms
and yeah man i did just rush it it was just a hollow
but heres some new shit



blood does work lol

 

@bayeroner i like that last one man, i can feel that one. would just change the B a lil to show the connection in between the top and bottom of the B

 

Your shit is always creative, unique and on point man. You got any tips or crits on mine bro?

 

devek i would just try to make all your bars the same size in the same spot like if you want it to get bigger then make them all bigger gradualy in the same spots and bye size i mean both width and height ( your k the bottom back bar is small and it getts bigger thats str8 but now the other part of your k get skinny in the middle .. no. make the bottom thin... middle a lill bit wider then the tops flared like the back bar now do that to every letter and how some of your bars are over the other one dont do that it dont look right yet better better bars then maybe it will look good your backl ground and char is good but keep those on the back burner ( dont stop doing them just wait till your letters are better so when you throw a char in there it fucking make the whole thing pop) keep praticing then and every thing it is the only way to get better man if that helps at all and dont take none of it the wrong way

 

Ahhh okay that all makes sense, thanks man I'll remember that and keep at it . I appreciate it!

 

Both are about a year old, pen freestyles. I hate pencils anyway, 1 out of every 30 pieces i do i might use a pencil. its rare.
You're attempting to do a cool style, Moler does it similar, but he does it very well. The difference is he has good base letters. If you take away all the fancy shit you do to your letters, they are ugly. I'm saying, take the time to learn letters better, then if you want, start going back to that style. Right now you are just polishing a turd. I'm giving you real critiques right now, you can chose to listen to these other people tell you that your shit is great, but anyone telling you that has no clout. Take it or leave it.