That's looking sick but that P kinda bugs me :/

 

Vapik is looking tight, some of you guys will be moving up in the world soon.

Made a step by step for insta, @originalrade if you wanna drop a follow or some likes

Sorry that it's huge and poor quality but I can't resize on ye olde iPad


i guess you could say I've improved since the last time we battled this word

 

Working on my letters. Crits welcome

 

just starting sketching graff last year, dont be to hard on me lol i would love more than love some tips

 

the one on the bottom says sultry and the one on top says wild

 

@rade thanks dog
@zossqo what about it?

 

@TrifeLife: your coloring and choice of colors is pretty descent, but the main thing is always the letterstructure and for me thats just something that isnt there atm
I would say start working with bars and do a lot simpler pieces for a while

 

@Semper: to see that much improvement thats just sick! How long ago was that first grim sketch?

 

@semper goddamn dude that's sick. not much to say... Maybe the coloring can be improved
@trife your shit needs to be more clean and that includes the coloring. You should probably work on your basic letters. And what is that background shit lol looks like the wallpaper in an old house

 

@Trife Practice basic keyboard letters over and over again. Dont go crazy on coloring or extra BS. Keep your letters consistent and don't overlap backwards, makes your letters look even more off.

@Semper Been following you on Insta my dude! Shit looks stupid fresh, really digging the M. The color scheme maybe could use improvement. Your sharp and aggressive looking (at least to me lol) looks dope with warm colors.

@Vapik Came out dope dude! A gray thick outline instead of the yellow would've looked sick I think. Good letters though, definite improvement overall.

@Niur Your simples are looking nice! Looks a lot better without the extensions. Although your I looks a bit off, maybe try working with an uppercase I instead? However, continue to work with simples. Maybe some mostly curved line simples and also some mostly straight simples. After a while I'd suggest getting down with some color and get a good grasp on color schemes. Extensions will come later when you begin to get your letters to flow perfectly. Nice work, keep it up.

 

ok thanks

 

you instantly became my best friend i call it swag fag

 

Awesome progression pics semper , I gotta put some up from the recent ice battle and the first time I did that word in a battle , I don't think I've progressed like u but still good shit

 

What do you think about these? These are meant to be painted, I know they are kinda simple, but they are for half legal spots.

 

Best math notes I've taken in a while..


Open to crits

 

@mefisto what is half legal spots lol? But they look ok, just the H might need a little tweakn
@semper shit smooth as always, love the lettering
New sketch "NEW" W is a lil abstract but its there lol