That's one fucking thing I hate, you got kids on here for months and get the balls to call out other people like they have some authority. I can be honest when a foo has a better or cleaner style than mine, but if your shit IS wack don't come at me telling me how to run my game. Throw a suggestion at the least.. And maybe I'll think about it. I look for advice from guys who been in the game, but still then again it's me and I do what I do.. I hope this is understood, something that has been bugging me for a while.

 

Why would you post it if you dont want people criticizing your work. You cant always expect people to say everything you do is good.

 

But I do understand your point, completely. No hate

 

@Dekay your A leans in an awkward way. The A and Y are behaving like they're a whole new word. They need to flow as a whole. Try having the K and A touch fully and flow together more. Btw, dont trip over dudes bagging bro, internet is always full of kids like that. Just work on that and it should flow and overall look a lot better. Hope that helps G

 

Well Ima first say fingerlickingchickens throws are better then mine, but in my opinion dekays are much better than his, that said, if you're going to call someone better than you wack you better back it up with an explinaton or suggestion fool.

 

^Agreed

 

Alright so I've been practicing shadows and I think I get the concept, now I just need to practice more right?



These were just done to get an idea, I know there's some inconsistencies, I just wanted to make sure I'm on the right track.

@Crackula Thats bangin, looks clean and interesting design

 

I'm not even going to say shit but if you're going to bring up a throwup don't use one I've only tried one time lmao

 

@Joy Really liking those. Clean and simple. Nice drop shadow as well.
heres some stuff of mine


crits

 

Thank you grabs, THAT RIGHT THERE helps me get better.. Also well said Vapik I appreciate it.
And SYBE, I'll be honest, that painted throw on the bottom of that freight is coo, but the other stuff is ok. I'm not here to measure who's dick is bigger ok, I make you better, you make me better simple as that. I've been writing on and off since 7th, I'm out of school now and had I stuck with it completely things would be different .. Besides that I just didn't appreciate you callin my stuff wack when your stuff is definitely not all that...

 

What about this

 

@Dekay Looks A LOT better, but still room for improvement. Try dropping the whole between the 2 legs on the A lower to match the Y and K. Dope style dude

 

^agreed but not all the way, maybe half. Also your E is the only letter with the pointy top if that makes sense. Maybe incorporate it in the Y or something.

 

@Dekay looking way better. Really liking that.

Crits for me???

 

Thanks guys, I'll try that, it makes sense

 

This has potential , my advice would be to just do all your throws in pen, no pencil, no fill or outline, just a hollow until you can find a style or rhythm you like, keep at it.

 

Thanks man, I've been doing pen throws, so ill keep at em. Thanks