started writing bard cuz im fed up with my 'E's... crits? View attachment 121314 View attachment 121315
Loon - "I want you to take over control..." reminded me of it lol. I see you have experience in drawing characters, but the character in your drawing is too big, like you cant really see the piece, so practice just drawing pieces, if you dont have motivation check out some oldschool pieces, they took me in the game! Proer - Use bars. And go simple. you cant still draw 3ds and stuff, just make simple letters till you get it
a pen sketch of a first idea for the burn battle that i did in a few minutes not really happy with how the R is going and didnt have room for the N there any crits on this please
Hi everyone, I'm new to the site, and I started to write a few month ago. This is my recent piece, so crits is helpful. Thanks, btw.
^the way your bottom legs of the k cross doesn't look right, also think it would look better with an apposing flow i on the end. Ralpmet that b looks nice but the middle of the r needs to be merged into one bar, it's ok to have separate ones but only if they're quite thin. You also need to work on keeping your lines from putting "lumps" in your bars. Never tried 3d before so I though I might as well try, it sucks but I have to start somewhere. Apologies for the shitty flicks, yes there are filters. Don't judge. Knowme exchange
Thnx for the crits Semper! I'll workon that R like you said. I'm not sure what you mean with " You also need to work on keeping your lines from putting "lumps" in your bars. " I'm not native english so that might be the problem
Made a first pencil sketch for that Burn tried to adjust the R a bit, added the N, still not completely happy with the R Still have to add 3d and such offcourse if i can find the time to finish it in time any crits please?
Semper! Im learning 3d graffiti, did you make the piece with 2 point perspective, 3 point perspective technique? Or did you just drew 3d shapes and fit them?
Ralpmet, i think it will look better if you can make the U a little bit bigger, so it would be balance with the other letters .
I like the splatter background but the letters seem to get lost in the connections. Here's something I just outlined. Not liking the N too much but I like the overall look of it Says da goon in the N loon da goon is my aka
Grabs -You have a good style. I can tell you really starting to understand Letter structure. I appreciate that you use one bar for two letters, for I do the same. The only thing I can really suggest is that you work on your H's structure. And also take it easy on the 'add-on' at the top right of your A. It dominates over the real principles of the letter. Keep drawing! Also your tag looks like crap Ralpmet - Your structure and placement is on point. In my experience, I have learned that Letters have a certain flow, as does the wild style bullshit. Think of better placement for the 'add-ons'. Also your tag looks like a seen knock off. Enki - I like how you mad the E resemble the K. Work with that more. Try making them follow the same flow pattern. I like your tag only because it reminds of me when I sucked. Lich - Stay more simple on the P and T. Make the bottom of the O sync with the bottom of the S. Also make the top of the P and S do the same. I can actually read your tag. Congrats! mefiesto - Great shit bro. Your first Rhf is pretty funky though. Work on keeping them on a straight flow like the second one. Your name is solid as fuck. Niro - Keep your lines even. There is a lot inconsistency with the line thickness. I can tell you don't go out and spray for the pure fact that you don't have steady lines. Google Mike giant. His lines are always solid. His Illustrations are mind boggling. throw backs
why would you even attempt to learn "3d graffiti" if you dont even know the most simplest shit? shits gonna crash hard.