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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    And even if they did who cares? you are a toy, otherwise you wouldnt be posting in the toy thread...
    Quickish shit in a homies book.
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  2. DZEDOZER

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  3. DZEDOZER

    DZEDOZER Senior Member

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    Yeah you right vapik. I am, but it's like the Bullshit is unnecessary. Posting a link to fucking three year old's drawing and trying to talk shit when they don't even know about letters. Real unnecessary.
     
  4. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Hahaha for real that was funny as hell tho.
     
  5. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    This needed to be said, some people get massive heads in here

    Deus that's a pre tight simp, just keep doing them and add extensions where they feel natural and style will come in time.

    Vapik you've come a long way, the bottom leg of the k bugs me but other than that your doing well. Keep at it

    Made a start, hopefully will finish tonight or tomorrow.
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  6. _flocka_

    _flocka_ Senior Member

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    I just reaaaaally hate characters now a days... I just don't find them stylish or creative anymore, that's not just aimed at you..
     
  7. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    My entry for the Burn battle (please crit):
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  8. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    @rade thanks G, and I know what you mean, I don't like it either, just trying to find some new ways of ending it.
    @evasd well I don't really like the way you used the colors, it's not really bad, just the way you put em in makes it hard to read. Besides that not much to say, the extension that goes down to the leg of the R makes it look a little like a B. Over all like the piece tho
     
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  9. Grabs

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    @Evasd Your style is tight dude and when you fully begin to understand color, your pieces will be hard. The way you color blocked the piece makes it unappealing to the eyes, however you have the motivation to get creative and thats good. Continue to work with color, maybe look into ways that other artists with a similar style use color. Good work though dude, I like it.
     
  10. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    @ Vapik & Grabs: Thanks for the crits. Will definitely go do some research and study work on what other writers are doing with their colours in their pieces.
     
  11. Ralpmet

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    Finished my sketch for the Burn battle
    crits are welcome

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  12. ur210

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    doesnt look as clean as your other pieces, but still dope
     
  13. Semper

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    Mild the only advice I've got for you is maybe try and spice it up a bit, you seem more than comfortable with that style.

    Dreams there's nothing wrong with the colours you chose just the way you put them together.

    I can't really comment on colour though, I've never been the best with them, my lightning fills are the only ones worth the ink. This is A3 for the Burn battle, I have a sore wrist after busting this out.
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  14. Vapid666

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    Huh I was considering joining earlier...glad i didn't now. Lol
     
  15. W_G_O_N_E

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    Sick semper , u gmv , even though I don't like the rade and burn on it and the 3d looks a little sloppy , your letters are so advanced it doesn't matter , dreams def. can see awesome potential in your style , and ralpmet that looks nice , I'd say the serifs are a little overdone and get your outlines nice and clean , naked I'd like to see u do some different stuff to but it's still nice how u fit your letters together. Gonna be puttin these two onto canva$e$ image.jpg
     
  16. Semper

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    Thanks guys, the 3d is super dodgy because I couldn't be bothered penciling it all in. The little simples only really look bad because the 3d on them is even more fucked.

    Those are tight WGONE, structure is well and truly on point.

    Little simp for talking
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  17. Ralpmet

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    thnx for the crits guys!
    @Semper: the burn looks dope. you say its A3, you usually work that big on paper? And if so, is there an advantage to that? I have never done sketching on A3 so far
    @WGone: bot look really sick, love to see them colored, the one thing that is bothering me a bit is the right side of the N of the Justin sketch
    btw: where the hell did you get such an oldschool printer? ;)
     
  18. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    mildstyles - those simples are looking good mate
    semper - killin it as ever
    wgone - looking decent pal

    been a while since i posted.. lines are pencil so it's a bit dull but hey ho.. oh and swapped out the o for an e, but i'm fully aware my name is now one letter away from being smeg which is not a good look at all haha, think of a new one soon probably

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  19. W_G_O_N_E

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    Thanks guys , I feel yous on the N I think I might switch both the swirls on those pieces and I have two big ass boxes of that paper from my work , the printer is long gone. I like that one Junglizt the middle of the m is kinda smashed though
     
  20. AidsOne

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    image.jpg Quick straight. Any feedback.