The reason the black is shaky is because I made the mistake of doing the outline first. I only used Prismas. When I did the blending for the fill, it made the black bleed a little. I fell the opposite. I want to scrap the w and keep the other letters. I'm taking a break from the prismas anyways.
@Wynk, lose the extensions work with keyboards cause you still dont have a grasp on letter structure. @Zossqo Why do you do that style dude? Shit looks ugly as hell. On top of the pieces having no proper structure, your fills and overall use of color is awful. Work with black and white till you develop an understanding of flow and structure.
@Grabs Even without the extensions, what is wrong with that letter structure? I stayed consistent with the letters throughout.
Definitely do this. Those markers are meant for blending, not outlining. You should be more concerned with working on letter structure anyways. Stick to the sharpies and biros for now and when you get your style sorted try using microns for outlining.
@Wynk Letters don't flow. The lean to the K and W are off. Along with that, the Y's bottom bar doesnt match the rest of the style.
I know almost all of my pieces never have structure and the colors on this one were definitely bad, almost all pieces I do are experimental though so its good to know that isn't working cheers dude
dont flatter yourself. Flocka- the top and bottom have potential. the top Y gotta be scrapped, aint coin it.
Lol cute. Just keep doing the same simple for the next three years and talking shit on the Internet like it matters. You'll go so far as a writer, I promise. Flick for the chit chat, crits are cool, as long as they're REAL crits.
thanks guys, its actually really nice to hear im going in a good direction, im trying to keep it simple and really get a grasp of structure and shit
are u gonna like ink the true lines in and erase the pencil shit or what? looks like it could be something so far tho.
@belt haha yeah, I just hadn't done it yet, just posted what I was working on because of all the talking.
@naked, hmm I don't quite agree with everything you said, and I think you should take some of that advice on your last piece(the over complicating it part), but you are better than me so I'll take your advice.