theres your crits. you're lucky. and please make that pic smaller…. its nice to see good stuff in a big flick.. but yeah… need i say it?
why bother coloring it if your letters look like shit. you need to use that time to practice more letters @suburban are you chinese?
@ur210 nah man im whiter then mayonnaise @thespine, the grimy look i think your going for is cool just keep on practicing, all i can really say Pen sketch
I like the japanese style and japan its self but im as white as that wonder bread you butter up for breakfast Vapik, i know my posting up top with the letters is garbage and needs to be simplified so im eating my own words when i say maybe try simplifying a little bit more, you have gotten better from what i remember seeing a little while back, just keep practicing man
hi. first post.. been lurking for a while.. loads of inspiration on here. trying to do a minimum of one sketch per day - currently on day 13 - posted the ones that didn't suck completely.. mind you, these still do but im learning sorry if the scaling is fucked new to this posting DAY 5 DAY 6 DAY 9 DAY 10 DAY 11 DAY 13 my initial observations points to a lack of coherence or consistency of letters/style throughout and some bad edges/shapes. all feedback and suggestions appreciated vvaves
@turban thanks G. And no worries homie, That's kind of how Ive been learning ever since I started: two steps forward, then one step back to work even harder on structure and shiiiit
@waves I'm feeling 13 it's nice and simple looks real good Here's a piece with some crazy shit going on in the fills lol. I know the piece itself is too small compared to the character but w.e And here's a drawing of Heimerdinger from league of legends
@Loon stop working with colors dude. Your letters are so weak compared to your coloring ability. Work with bars and fluency and theres no reason to make your O an object, get creative in the opposite direction and learn about letter structure to actually be able to produce letters that work. @Vapik The bottom leg on your K is way too thick, the top bar on the I is wavy which doesn't match the style. Along with those, the A's top bar throws off the letter, the V's loop thing on the right side doesn't serve a purpose and simply goes into negative space which makes the entire extension wrong. You're taking a step in the wrong direction homie.
30min time limit Sketches from a battle on saturday night with a few artists. View attachment 643916 Couple sketches; View attachment 643917
dope work as usual Eido, Been studying/messing with scripts lately and this is the first attempt at building letters with it, for the SIGHA battle, Not huge on the flow of the HA but i think it could be cool with some more tweeking and practice with the style. May need to thicken em up a bit.
soo, are you going for a piece that has script influence or are you going for just script letters? grab a book on calligraphy.
I suppose a piece with script influence. But yes this is more straight script. I'm hoping to kinda fatten em up and transform it into more piece like. Like I said this is a first attempt at something I'm not real familiar with. The calligraphy book is probably a good idea.
No lie dude that lacks flow and little resemblance to any actual , but it's not a bad start at all. Hit up some calligraphy books and just start practicing letter structures