Here's something I was working on tonight



And some older stuff

 

@Loon Drop the expensive ass markers and work on your letters dude. There's literally been like 10 other people on here that tell you that every time you post some sub-par piece. Work with bars and understanding structure before you bust out prismas. I'd much rather see your letters progress in black and white then continue to see letters that are overcompensated by complex fills and backgrounds.

 

I sketch my tags bitch, get on my level!


Loon comin through with them burners

 

Yo man i'm really digging Them blackbook sessions, looks dope how you see it filling in, even though you're actually doing it ahah, i like the style and colors. Pretty fresh man.

-Truant.THD

 

Fixed the throwie I posted in the other thread yesterday. Still new to find a way to make the K better.

 

Why does it matter if I choose to color it or not? lol and it's the toy thread every piece on here is subpar.

 

@Loon because you need to spend more time with basic letter structure; mainly consistency between the letters.

 

and again what does color have to do with it? how about instead of talking about color you say where the letter are inconsistent? theres been no constructive crits just people saying stop using color.

 

@Loon The time you spend coloring, could be used to bettering your letters

 

@Mild I have drawn the straight bubble letters over and over in my book already. Didn't think there was much of a point to post it, because there is nothing to crit on it.

 

Mild literally pulled the words out of my mouth ^^

 

Here is some damn straight letters for you

 

erm, mehhhh

 

Great videos eido! its really cool to see how you draw your sketches

 

@mild not being hard headed just that you all say forget colors and dismiss the peice. I'm not gonna stop using color it's fun to color in pieces. Doesn't mean I'm not working on the letters. What's inconsistent of this piece? Heights pretty even thickness of letters are pretty much the same. What's inconsistent?

 

@loon The end of the bottom of the L and the serif on the top point I the N is what stands out the most. Same with the little point on the bottom of the second O. It doesn't seem to connect with the rest

 

You mean dick

 

whats with the dick jokes that is just rude…and why is there a throbbing dickhead on the bottom the L, loonaii

 

He likes the D