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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    You just called dick jokes rude then made a dick joke...and writing on others property definitely isn't rude either
     
  2. fingerlickingchicken

    fingerlickingchicken Senior Member

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  3. RatyzOne

    RatyzOne Senior Member

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    Its been a while since I've posted something here. Been working really hard on my stuff this winter...

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  4. ZorkOner

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    @Rats
    Good shyte. ;)
    Lovin' the plaid in the first one! and the digital pattern!
     
  5. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    ^^^rats …. that shtyle is proper keep it up the clouds on the green monster are dope

    just messing around…dropped the S on this one ….MEKMoney i like that new steez in the flicks for talk thread…and guyguyer from guyland nice

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  6. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    lunchbreak pen freestyle
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    And a two tone quicky
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  7. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    rats- bottom one reminds me of reds cbs

    phazr- stick with those and keep doing work with it
     
  8. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Quite a few exchanges, and one collab Im working on with my homie donor otc
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  9. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @Vapik Simples are looking nice besides small mistakes on extensions, which dont really stand out as being that bad. Good work

    @Rats Idk how much you care but theres a dude from Detroit that writes Rats. Besides that, flow looks on point. The T's look fairly similar, it'd be nice to see you add some of that ability from your other letters to your T. Dope work though

    @Phazr That simple style you use is fire dude, I'd continue to work with that style if I were you homie. You could easily develop clean and crazier style pieces with the foundation you have.

    @Gards I like that G minus the back extension. The A's horizontal extension on the top throws it off a little. The R's loop is more circular than the rest of the letters which throws off the style. and The D's thickness seems a little too thick and it also seems a little too short. You seem to have the right idea dude, it just seems like little mistakes that just take practice to perfect. Keep working homie
     
  10. Moler_Lmk

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  11. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @Moler that new steez is out of this world homie O.O . Keep working to perfect that shit, you're onto something way more progressed than your old work.
     
  12. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    ok way out of my comfort zone, but i sketched this up last night while a little drunk and its kinda grown on me so i may finish it. So constructive crits would be cool. The Z needs obvious work and the extentions are wonky but i like the A.
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  13. RatyzOne

    RatyzOne Senior Member

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    Thx for the comments, it's really appreciated. I know what you mean with the ''T''. I feel the same. It looks pretty boring beside the other letters...

    For my blaze, I don't really care. I was more scared that people would think I bit the name of Rath who's an amazing technical writer...


    @Vapids : I like your stuff. Little mistakes here and there but overall its looks great. Nice fill in tho.

    @Phazr : Keep it up what that gnarly flow. Imo, your horizontal bars on the ''Z'' should be like all your other letters. I can't wait to see it finish...
     
  14. Semper

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    Molder I'm digging the new style.

    Making some progress on a word entry
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  15. eido777

    eido777 Senior Member

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    Wow, this thread is becoming better, i'll soon need to be posting back here if everyone keeps progressing like they are! Good work All!!!

    Giving away free graffiti stickers, just as a thank you :) Check the video.

     
  16. VeRsMoneY

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    My first post on here so Crits are welcome image.jpg
     
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  17. VeRsMoneY

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    I'll also post some throws I do
     
  19. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @vers work with bars dude. Your work is sloppy as fuck. You cant even handle a straight line. Don't do extensions, dont do faces, do keyboard letters until you at least get a decent grasp on structure.
     
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  20. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    Ward pen freestyle, the D is too big
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    Rame pen freestyle, the E is busted and the M's proportions are a bit off.
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    Crits are welcome