@grabs - the bottom part feels like it doesn't flow with the rest @Ace - Go more simple and even out the bar widths Exchange piece for PHAZR Crits please
tryed to post this in the intermediate thread but i dunno if im really good enough o hang with them dudes YOUTH View attachment 644128 PHAZR - those colors are fresh im real jealous of how crisp that came out. and i think you made the right decision by not throwing 3d on it SHOCK - work on your S bro. and maybe you should try going a little bigger.it might help with some of the mistakes your making. to me it looks like your scrunchign your letters up. and in my opinion you should take the little hooks off your k. less is more when your starting out if anyone is down for an exchange let me knoe
@Zoss That piece is tight yo My only crit is your highlights don't match up Their all over I can't figure out where the light is coming from ya know? Keep them on the same sides of all the letters. An example would be all highlights on the bottom right of all the parts exposed. like you have a light shining up from the bottom right corner of your pic. You get me? I'm toy but thats what stands out to me.
@Zossqo: looks pretty descent, i feel though that you should have chosen between bubbles and drips as background, now it looks a bit messy to me @Home: Do more basic letters, that T like it is now looks really bad to me. and drop the arrows, they dont add anything to the whole
@Shock Work on keyboard letters homie. Continually work with bars and get a grasp of structure. Get rid of the connections and extensions, it's just making your stuff look worse. @Zossqo I feel you on the B bro. On that PHAZR, great use of color and overlapping letters. I don't really see anything that really stands out as wrong. However, the overlapping between the H and A kinda bothers me and I'm not quite sure why. Overall, good work. @Youth Unique style homie, Just make sure you're working with bars to form proper structure. Looks tight though. @Twister Don't do anything you're currently doing lol. Do keyboard letters and work on structure. Drop all extensions, all connections and all the arrows. Work with basic letters.
@home I agree with grabs, although Id like to add that it seems you're using some bars which is good, just work on simple keyboards like he said.
line consistency in width needs work and am i trying to hard? i feel i am, the right image is readable one
@FuckThisWeather You're trying too hard G. Stay simple cause you honestly don't look ready for extensions/connections like you're trying. Do basic keyboard letters for a decent while to get down letter structure. To be completely honest dude, that shit is so messy idk what it's even supposed to say. Overall, drop all extensions/connections for the time being, dont worry about coloring, and dont even worry about shadowing it. Just work with width consistency, letter structure and matching your letters to a consistent style.
Zoss, I like what you're doing lately. You down for a quick black and white exchange? Finally finished the Word piece. Need a better flick to enter
Great sketch semper! Really like the "non-compicated" coloring that still has a lot of light/dark parts to make it look great and offcourse the semper-lightning which allways looks great. Cant really see anything wrong with this one.