^^^loon…the l makes it kinda look like coon and the bend on the is inconsistent one sharp one rounded it looked a lot straighter when i was drawling
@Belt That piece before the stickers is crazy dope, feeling the B a lot. @Dozer Dope work G. The R seems to need a little work though, the leg could've extended a little longer or curved back like the K did. @Loon You don't even listen to crits.. Keyboards, your letters are whack as fuck. @Gards Letters look a little wonky but have potential for sure. Good consistency sticking with all lowercase and also matching the style throughout. The A, R and D are bugging me. The A's top bar curves at a weird angle. The R I think looks off just cause you dont see lowercase R's often in pieces but the overall flow between the R and D looks rushed and off. The flow between the R and D could've been better if the R's top bar didn't overlap right where the lobe and the spine of the D connect. Hope that somewhat helps/makes sense. @Sol Dope color scheme but the letters need work. Looking better than stuff you've posted in the past though, so keep working buddy.
@ grabs Thanks holmes heres a quick outline so you can see my S and L O's different. Bars are still killing me. Especially curves. Oh I ain't stoppin' bombings too much fun. Had to run last night in the middle of a throwie had a spotlight on me haha. Can't get caught either not since I did the busses they'd love that. Might try some nicer pieces at some chill spots for a bit.
@Loon - L and N need huge amounts of work, go back to basics as everyone has said to @Syphcophant - Not too bad but still need tweaks with your letters, also your 3D is all over the place... very frustrating on my eyes @Sol - Solid fills going on, that blue needs something else though... because it makes it hard to find you letters (dark blue with a black outline) maybe add some highlights ? also liking the second one, the 'O' sort of reminds me of the green lantern emblem, but As people have been saying your bars still need work. @DZEDOZER - Clean crisp lines but as @grabs said, the R right leg needs to maybe extend further or curve like the A and K. @Belt - Your grimy style never seizes to amaze me awesome shit dude, keep it up. @Semper - sick shit as always dude simple fill, with sick af letters and that damn awesome lightning. Hell yea I'd like to do an exchange as you may or may not know, I write 'Miunz' @grabs exchange piece 'OVER' Crits welcome
The v is a little hidden but other than that it's good. Hmu with a rade/rase23, just black and white because I suck at colours. Dzedozer that's bangin man, maybe a curved top on the E would have better suited. I like where your style is going it reminds me of a guy on here SPAN his account is mori or something. Quick outline exchange for a guy on insta
@Semper Ill as usual homie, good work. But I disagree with your color work sucking G, your shit looks fresh in color 95% of the time. @Zossqo Looking good homie, I'll draw up something today during school or tonight. @Shock The cross bar on your H is too long, shorten it or end it at the spine of the H. The K doesn't match as well. Continue to work with bars buddy, curved and straight.
belt- killin it man keep it up filth - that shits tight i like the colors skeam and the bars are on point grads- i like what your trying to do but you got a few to many bends where there unnecessary zossqo - i like that shit allot mang SEMPER- *word unneeded*
Looks pretty good vape. I'd maybe make the loop on the p bigger though. And the extension on the v is kind of cluttery. You know? But it looks good man
@Elbow Looking better G. I'd continue to work on your actual letters and stray from coloring and extra clutter if I were you. @Vapik Dope, freestyles are my favorite shit dude. The cross bar on the top of the I is the thing that bothers me the most and I'm not entirely sure, just kind of throws off the flow. Good consistency in style though, continue to work and experiment.
Belt, always liked that grimey shit. Same with Elbow, looks cool as fuck. Dzedozer, That Akers is clean. nice job. Semp, killing it. Vape, yeah, as the others said, The P is a little small at the top, and maybe make both bars on the I extend the same way. Quick doodle