I posted these in the picture gallery subforum, but didn't I wouldn't mind actually getting some feedback, so I'll post them here and see what y'all think. First though, a few crits for the cats above me- @ur210: that BRACKER is on point man, keep it up. not really much to suggest for you, just keep doing what you're doing or switch up little things as you see fit. You've got the flow and structure down, so just have fun with it bro. You could always just write BRACK for throws too if you're pressed for time. Good shit. @eido777: I think it's a little bit too cluttered here man, just concentrate a little more on making each letter look solid on its own .. A bit more negative space wouldn't hurt. I think you can make it really fresh if you scale it back a bit first. Nice functional connections and extensions will naturally find their way in there as you let the letters balance out that negative space on their own. Still cool, though. @Stickerslapt: Putting that shit anywhere outside of your blackbook makes all other writers look bad. I'm not gonna bother sugar coating it. Stop tagging shit immediately and stick to paper until you develop an actual handstyle of some sort. Seriously. @abe: It would look better if you didn't carry lines over from one letter to the next on your tag. Just lay em out individually. Also if drips are your thing then that's cool, just try not to drip to the point where the whole letter starts to cave in on itself, feel me? That ink is dope though, did you make it yourself or buy it? The moniker is kinda clever too. @Sol: This is why I haven't posted a throwup for you yet, your name is too damn short for me to work some solid steez in there so it just looks super simple each time I've tried it so far! That other cat that you exchanged with who had the KILLER throwup style (you know who I'm talkin about lol) said something to the that effect, too. The S and L swallow up that O in the middle. If you're not dead set on SoL, an extra letter or two at the end would make it way easier to play around with. I liked how you hit all those city buses a couple pages back though, that's the type of shit I like to see
@Baker think again lol Keep your shit simple and legible. Your letters are all leaning in different directions which fucks up your flow.
Thanks bro. I'm not exactly a toy, been doing this shit for like 5-6 years now, but there are actually some pretty dope hands in here and I wouldn't mind some crits, so.. @guns...please don't put that in public. Keep it SIMPLE. The flair will come with time. I'd much rather see a nice simple tag with good structure/form and consistent style in each letter (like all rounded letters or all sharp edged letters or whatever) than some convoluted bullshit with bad form just trying to make it look more complex than it really is. Think about it...you're already doing something 99% of people are too afraid or not confident enough to go out and do. You don't have to try and make people think you are some kind of mad genius scriptologist to validate your tag man. @Taro...That looks freshhhh! I was trying to follow your line and it looks like it might take more time/effort just to keep it one line, but I do like the 'A' the way you have it there
Pixacao letters don't touch each other. They aren't meant to flow together, they stand individually to make a point.
@ Foo I made these up.... but thanks for the heads up about Pixacao letters another guy told me I have other letters that look like brazil hands. Might look into those alphabets now just so I can not look like them haha.
@Sol If you want a good foundation for it then look up some of the old Scandinavian runes. It's what the entire pixacao alphabet is based off of.
@Sol diggin the top two rows @ guns I'd change the L to make it more legible @ Ace its a good start, legible and level, keep at it and makin little changes Makin slight changes to my tag, Crits?