@Bkbomber - It is a one liner.

 

Lol it's not shit talk, there's nothing I can recognize as an R in there. Just a circle and a random squiggle.

 

I agree with Vapid.

 

for sure i see where yall coming from and before some cats just talk shit instead of doing a critc u know what i mean... what u think i should do to change the R ????

 

Oh haha thought you were talking about me. And just take it back a few steps and do a simple legible r, then slowly develope it

 

for sure ill tag it up on the wall after my therapy and post it

 

@Taro- didn't say it wasn't.

 

A bit rusty.

 

2 bottom right ones are cool.

 

Oops lol

 

Moler no critz needed dope as usual
Game The bottom right is the best expand on that style
New name Haunt critz?
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@Bkbomber - my bad i must have misunderstood.

 

@ Moler

Props hands are tight, look very much like your pieces thats cool you get that much of the same style in both.

@ Fabel

Cool style man I like the idea of filler in between letters there



Appreciate crits just random stuff

 

@Sol. I like the way how you keep it simple! Keep it up!

 

so here is my simple tag, and my main tag, WITH the R changed i took off the circle on the R , what yall think....

 

@Moler Always dope bruh

@Haunt Just be careful with how you do your filler in between letters. Somewhat takes away from the letters and makes in illegible. Dope concept, keep working.

@Sol Cut some of the negative space and work with making your letters look a little more loose and natural. That seems to be more of a struggle for you than anything homie, don't try too hard.

@Phree Get rid of that loop shit you do with your E's. Honestly dude, that top basic letter looks better than the handstyle you have on the bottom.

 

Might start writing a new name. Did a small amount of searching and haven't found any conflicts yet, let me know if it's taken



Trying to keep things relatively simple right now. Working on the one-liner still, but overall I like it better than my JOY tag