@taro it might just be me, but the O feels a little seperate from the rest of it. Also Id thicken up the top of the leg of the R and the crossbar of the A a bit. Besides that it's looking good, clean as shit too

 

@Vapid, Thanks man. I did that because some people told me it looked too smunched together. Ill try and pull it in more.

 

@taro it's not that the spacings off, I think you just need to lean it to the left like the other letters.

 

First try at painting it.

 

clean work man. what kind of paint u use? i just came back from bombing with shitty white paint was transparent as fuck lol. but like Vapik said if that O was leaning to the left would flow a bit better but shits fire my dude.

 

Ok yea i deff see it. left lean it is, ill try it tomorrow. As for paint i use Rusto and 94. I also use Hardcore for tags. I really only use that cause thats whats at my local shop and i can steal rusto so thats always good.

 

New to the forum, just felt like posting this, what do you guys think?

 

@loon stop painting for a while, and you don't need to be trying one liners at your level, just do regular simple letters on paper pal

 

@Cream Not bad for first bombs homie. Scrap that last 2 letter.

@Taro Very clean dude, your simples are on point.

@Loon Agree with Vapik ^^. stray away from one liners.

@Kervs Dope style dude, Im feeling it. Keep working!

 

Ye the one liner looked better in the book lol

 

Hit this wall within 24 hours of it being buffed lolol. The O is kinda fucked on the right side because of it being too light and shit. I hit this before I hit another spot and got the cops called so I'll try to get a flick of the other one some time soon

 

@over try to move your body with the can, not just your arm. It'll make your lines more consistent.

 

Exchange anyone?

 

Throwie exchange? and if yes im down. I write Taro.

 

alright i write creak

 

Yo guys i'm new to the forum i wanted some tips to see what you guys think! Thanks guys!

 

down for a throw exchange, i write apone