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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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    noad215 Senior Member

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  3. Rone14

    Rone14 Member

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    Bump, any advice guys, really would like some help
     
  4. erOs905

    erOs905 Member

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    @NOAD I like the D = underline of the 2nd tag in picture 1 except it could be cleaner, not going through the letters and stopping after the curve instead of going back under the D. Maybe try using the line in the middle of the A to extend through to the O or D and put a flare on it. Simple but definitely needs some evolution and style. Just make sure your lines are perfected and not too sloppy. Also, is your name short for NOMAD? I think the M might give you more to play with if it is.

    @SENSE Looks solid, the letters in your name are very well balanced. Play with the S and find the one you think fits best with the e&N. I think the simplicity is good but maybe try practicing some wild styles too, while tagging with simples until you get the wild styles down.

    Honest modesty: I'm toy so don't take my advice in stone.
     
  5. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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    Thanks for the crits! No its a play on node or no-ad
     
  6. Jackyl

    Jackyl Member

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    @Noad The first two tags of the first picture are a lot sharper compared to the rest of them. I like the first one the best, nice, clean, simple letters, but cut that arrow or make it a smoother, one stroke motion. The second tag of the first picture looks fine, but make the D smaller to fit in with the rest of the letters. The third tag looks sloppy, and the fourth looks just like four letters written next to each other, not really a tag. Though good practice for forming letters. So keep with the style of the first two.

    For the second picture, the letters don't seem sharp, so like I said above, I'd keep practicing with the style of the first two.

    Add an M and it could be Nomad. Good if you ever have to change your name, I guess. (Lol just saw that's what @Eros wrote).

    @Rone, dunno if you saw this before, but I'll post it again anyways.

     
  7. erOs905

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    003.jpg 001.jpg


    Thanks for crits, here's some basic attempts at your names.
     
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  9. Jackyl

    Jackyl Member

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    @Eros thanks! I'll try and post a pic of your name up here tomorrow.

    The top picture on the left; that tag looks so clean! It might just be the bolder color, but it's looking really fresh. The right picture, top tag, looks good, really digging the extension on the left bar of the A. The bottom tag of the right, top picture looks good but a little squished, I'd keep with the previous two. The middle left picture, I love the contrast of the curve and the sharp edges on the M, but I'd make the bottom of the E a little bigger like you usually do on other tags to balance it out. The right middle picture, the letters are a little too spaced out, but I like the E. For the bottom picture, top tag, really digging that E again, but sharpen up the other letters. The flow is a bit off for the MAZ. For the bottom tag, really liking the style of the M, but crunch those letters a little closer.
     
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  10. IbuprofenTablets

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    ... I hope you motherfuckers aren't paying for these blackbook/markers...
     
  11. fatboislim

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    Word
     
  12. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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    1411758974609.jpg . So this I'm fairly happy with ad a basic tag but I need some advice as to what accents or underline or just some tips to spruce it up a bit. Thanks guys
     
  13. Jackyl

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    I much prefer the top tag, but I feel like something's lacking, the letters are reasonable, but they need to fit together better.
     
  14. Jackyl

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    Chacal Black.jpg Maze Blue.jpg Maze Black.jpg

    Crits welcome for both Chacal and Maze tag (for @Eros)
     
  15. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Your doing too much go simpler. You give good advice to other people, look at ur work as if it's not urs and listen to ur own advice.
     
  16. Jackyl

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    @loonaii Thanks for the advice, yeah, I'll try looking more critically at my own work. Do you suggest just doing simple letters loosely connected?
     
  17. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    Keep the letters seperate for now for better impact. Work on your letters individually and simply, @Jacky. My crappy examples of your combination of letters may help
     
  18. Jackyl

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    Decided to go practice tagging with some paint; I was going to write "Chacal" but I think I'm going to just shorten it to "Cha"; then wrote "Spray" just to sort of fool around with some letters. Crits appreciated.
     

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  19. SAYO

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    I feel you need more practice. I mean this in a nice way. The h in Cha is throwing me off because your C is so big compared to the rest of the letters. Work on spacing and try all caps
     
  20. Jackyl

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    @SAYO yeah, this was just a practice run using paint. The H was supposed to be bigger, but the paint didn't apply well to the blue part so doesn't really show up if you did just one line. But thanks, I'll keep practicing.