@thatguy From an art perspective, that looks nice, from a perspective of letter structure, etc., I can make out the B and the E, and sort of the G (but I wouldn't have layered that E over it, and I'd have made it bigger). I can't make out the other letters at all really just because all the lines and everything drawn in the letters. That's from a purely letter-structure critique point, but in terms of being interesting, it is a sight for the eyes.
Specifically for the letter structure: The part where the middle bar covers the part of the G makes it look like an S kinda The letter (s?) between the G and the N are hard to make out The N is legible in my opinion but kind of lacks style -- it's just an N. EDIT: But yeah I like that fill tea and the character is pretty sweet
Haven't drawn anything for a minute, here's my first pen sketches in over 3 years http://imgur.com/Z9Y0GGJ http://imgur.com/N0KKyCO
Dreams your shit always looks dope, liking the experimental fill ? My latest piece, crits please Miunz
One million arrows, 2 million stars. And what Im guessing was ms paint. Letters look good, but piece overall looks wack as fuck
Girlfriends name Starla, but speaking of arrows may i get some tips/crits on arrows and how to add them or where on my piece. Thanks.
Been a minute since I've posted.. @Retro clean letters dude, would definitely like to see more @Dreams dope as always. Such a unique style that its honestly hard to give crits. Only thing that seems to be a repeating issue (for me at least) is legibility in your letters. @elbow you're not even trying anymore bruh lol MS Paint and shit.. @Miunz Symmetry of the pieces are looking nice, the colors are as well. Digging the work crits are always welcome
@Zoup: Arrows usually work best with extensions off the letters, depending on the style. You're style is kinda difficult to add arrows to. It'd probably be easier to add simple extensions, plus the pointy ends on your letters won't let the arrows look good or stand out. But maybe an arrow on the 1st and last letter. @Miunz: Yep, you should have done the 3D black, the bubbles green, a thicker outline and straighten out the corner on the M and the Z, that way they'll look better. @Grabs: That red Dasr has probably the best flow.
@grabs and zossqo: Thanks for the kind words! Yeah, I see I'm getting more and more crits about the legibility of my style...I will try and re-work it and simplify it
@Osber: I thought I got you, my bad. Cool style, I like it. Not sure if you do or not but you should do themed pieces. That sketch you did looks like it has an astronaut/space ship type theme. Cool stuff, keep it up.