My tag is "Blind" and i know its not very great and i need some constructive criticism and some tips to make it better
^Just stick with basic letters no extensions and keep working on your flow but im pretty sure theres a lot of people writting blind or atleast there was
@baabo The B and R don't look too bad together, but then the UCE have a softer style, so either, make all of them with hard lines or keep all of them soft. It's well-executed, but the way they go together could be improved. I like the top picture a lot more than the bottom one, a lot cleaner in terms of execution. @bridog I would take Hrzy's advice and go simpler at first, work on basic letter structure before moving on to all that fancy stuff.
^^^ The middle brown looks ok. Just change that R, no loop, and straighten out the U and C. The reds look too bubbly and girly.
@Mits The one going horizontal I like the best, it's definitely the cleanest one. I'd take away the line underneath it though, it looks out of place.
@Eros, the way the F and the H go, they have the same flow (with the triangle extension on both of them), but the E doesn't match the same flow. I'd either try and fit the flow of the E with that of the F and the H, or base the whole tag around the flow of the E. Otherwise, clean and simple, it's nice but needs a bit more brushing up.
Yeah I was thinking the same thing. I just gotta find a style that flows with all letters... The E just doesn't seem to fit any which way I shape it. I was thinking maybe a lowercase e but that throws it off too. I'll post some later once this tag has improved.