I'll try to make it better and post it tommorow and it'll be darker

 

bump. also these arent my best. these are what i could find.

 

FUZBALL whatever happened to sunday being the deadline for our battle, and u still havent submitted me ur piece, come on hurry up!

 

bump..feedback

 

what did the second one say?

 

give me some critique

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it says Enema

 

allt hoes arrows are and look stupid

 

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heres sumtin i did real quick what ya think?

 

it looks alright.

 

hey rots, what's it say?

 

you need to take off that fat arrow at the bottom man..

 

does that say "SENCE"?

 

sence,spence, or some shit

 

Edit...

*deleted the bad link heres the good one
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1W0SR5K...511EDTQ69HWVBBI

 

thats really helpful kay thanks did u get my pm? and the video shitted out with me at the outline also

 

FUCK! .. i need to find a good video host..theres like still 2 more min of that video left... anyone know a good host?

*and nah i dident get your pm

 

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thoughts

 

yep shitted out on the outlines h34r: