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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Asis13

    Asis13 Senior Member

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    Fucking around with some handstyles.

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  2. Bridog22

    Bridog22 Member

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    My tag is "Blind" and i know its not very great and i need some constructive criticism and some tips to make it better
     
  3. Hrzy

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    ^Just stick with basic letters no extensions and keep working on your flow but im pretty sure theres a lot of people writting blind or atleast there was
     
  4. Bridog22

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  5. Jackyl

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    @baabo The B and R don't look too bad together, but then the UCE have a softer style, so either, make all of them with hard lines or keep all of them soft. It's well-executed, but the way they go together could be improved. I like the top picture a lot more than the bottom one, a lot cleaner in terms of execution.

    @bridog I would take Hrzy's advice and go simpler at first, work on basic letter structure before moving on to all that fancy stuff.
     
  6. baabo123

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    yeah gotta work on it
     
  7. baabo123

    baabo123 Member

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    Wich one is better and how could I improve it
     
  8. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ The middle brown looks ok. Just change that R, no loop, and straighten out the U and C.
    The reds look too bubbly and girly.
     
  9. SAYO

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    Critz? I dropped an L
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  10. noad215

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    Fucked that n up IMG_20141112_010024069.jpg 128662[/ATTACH]
     
  11. noad215

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  13. Mits

    Mits Senior Member

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    New name, Daek, crits?
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  14. noad215

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  15. Jackyl

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    @Mits The one going horizontal I like the best, it's definitely the cleanest one. I'd take away the line underneath it though, it looks out of place.
     
  16. erOs905

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    Says FEH
    Crits/advice?

    Anyone in 905, particularly Hamilton?
     

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  17. Jackyl

    Jackyl Member

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    @Eros, the way the F and the H go, they have the same flow (with the triangle extension on both of them), but the E doesn't match the same flow. I'd either try and fit the flow of the E with that of the F and the H, or base the whole tag around the flow of the E. Otherwise, clean and simple, it's nice but needs a bit more brushing up.
     
  18. erOs905

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    Yeah I was thinking the same thing. I just gotta find a style that flows with all letters... The E just doesn't seem to fit any which way I shape it.
    I was thinking maybe a lowercase e but that throws it off too. I'll post some later once this tag has improved.
     
  19. ZenithONE

    ZenithONE Senior Member

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    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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