thats awesome:F you got it

 

Sabotaz, a few things need work but yeah

 

@Zoss your stuff is really sweet, I think you've got the 3d down. I like the last one especially
@Junglizt i think it would look pretty sweet if you use those open parts to blend to the background if you could, like with colored pencil or somehting. I like your lettering but the B is so slanted it kind of looks like an M

 

How's this goin?
Edit: coloured

 

And another, no crits?

 

As I think Ive said before, stop writing kaser. That aside, your letters are decent and your fills are very nice. Dont stop writing but change your name

 

@asek, the first piece is nice, maybe try another one with thinner letters and a clearer fill to really see the letter structure, idk it looks good, as well as the characters. Your second piece is alright, although the arrow hookup from the R makes the impression of an I between the S and E. The E is shaped strangely. Nice coloring and 3D on both

Work sketch, washed out the colors I used because I hated them.
Any crits?

 

@Asek1: Im feeling the second one, letter structure needs some work but the whole thing overall is good. Maybe you should just write Asek, it'll look better.

@Retro: Cool idea, just work on your letter bar proportions. Also that T looks weird.

 

Hey, I'm kinda new (been following a while)
Little about myself, I've been drawin graff for maybe half a year now, never been out bombin yet due my age (don't want any trouble) and I'd rather just practise on paper before bombin some shit
This is my school folder and as you can see I am pretty bored in school.. crits welcome..

 

Drop all the halos clouds diamonds and drips man your letters need work
Mr peanut's name was originally Bartholomew Richard Fitzgerald-Smythe.

 

Trying a new name
War solves nothing

Looking for crits if you guys wouldnt mind
I realize the n is whack I don't know what I was thinking
And I tried to work on 3d a bit

 

Fade = Boring name. You want nice bars not weird shit, No excuses on age I understand its hard to find paint but I just sold my Xbox for 15 cans of laks so if you want it that bad you will get it. I still find a way to get out and do a piece now and again ahah dont really bomb tho cause there is no-one in my town that does it so no point haha.

 

I know it's pretty toy and I'm not Rain One, (I did this canvas before I realized other people wrote rain), but here's a canvas I've been working on for some time.
Crits would be appreciated. For the right train, I really tried to make it look like a wildstyle piece like from the '80s whereas on the left one I tried to focus on lettering.
I know my handstyle is ass but any tips would be appreciated

 

War solves nothing

 

Lol bro u sold ur xbox for paint when ur at this level? Bad choice man. For all you guys under 18 go steal paint. Fuck it even if
Ur older go steal paint. If u get caught u won't get a criminal record just a fine or community service soft shit.

 

It's not about the consequences. I buy all my paint because I want to support the graffiti shop I buy it from. It's about keeping the art alive and the supplies available. Its not stealing from the government, it's stealing from other writers.

 

That was fuckin gay^^^
ahah go grab it from big stores like walmart or home depot. They deserve to get stolen from

 

In NZ It is locked up. and dont tell me 1 dollar cans because we got none laks are cheaper then hardware

 

I mean like stealing from those shops is okay but like a small local graffiti store is not in my opinion.