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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^ That Retro sketch looks cool. So you from Dallas... I was staying up there in Hurst last year.
     
  2. retro-one

    retro-one Member

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    Thanks, and yeah
    Currently live in a small suburb just south of downtown
     
  3. darry86

    darry86 New Member

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    I'm brand new to graff and am definitely a toy. I just wanted a crit on my handstyle. I know it isn't great, but I was wondering what I can do to improve.

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  4. retro-one

    retro-one Member

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    Welcome to the forums, all writers are welcomed haha,
    I'm not too good with handstyles but it seems that yours is pretty solid, although I can't really read that last word
    Maybe try making less space between your words, bring them closer together but keep them legible

     
  5. stoke.

    stoke. Senior Member

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    it says "promote the stoke"?!xD
    kill that lines across the O ´s
    my advice is that classic shits like stars,quotes or arrows... can help haha but the most important thing are the letters
     
  6. osber

    osber Senior Member

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    That line across the os makes em look like Es.
     
  7. darry86

    darry86 New Member

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    Thanks all! I've since done almost an entire sketch book of handstyke. Here is more recent styles without all the extra lines and goofy shit. image.jpg
     
  8. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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  9. Socon

    Socon Member

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    Feel like I'm getting pretty solid on my lettering, but I'm nervous to do backgrounds and fill in my work.

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  10. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    your letters are solid. if your really worried about fuckin up the sketch (which you shouldn't be) make copies of it and rock a bunch of different fills and effects. much like every other aspect, practice is the only thing that will make you better
     
  11. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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    Thinking of switching to a lower case "a" how do y'all do yours? 20141208_180404.jpg
     
  12. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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    Disregard the other tags just stoned and doing my dogs name if she was a hippy tagger
     
  13. osber

    osber Senior Member

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    Then just draw backgrpunds and fills ;)
     
  14. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Been out for a minute

    Noad looks like you're trying to do a throwie, get some bars in there.

    Moler, shits still hot as ever

    Socon your letters are fairly on point, at this point you need to be experimenting with different flows and letter combos. Make sure you're not stuck doing the same sketch over and over and you should progress pretty quickly.

    Got a WIP and a black and white, been slack on the sketching so my standard has slipped a little. Apologies for size, i have no idea how big they are as I'm posting from my phone.
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  15. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Cool stuff, Semper. On the 2nd one, is it a S or D?
     
  16. noad215

    noad215 Senior Member

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    I am trying to do a throw.
     
  17. Scma

    Scma Senior Member

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    The best tip for a throw is to throw it dont sketch it look for vids of people drawing their throw it flows yours looks to sketched
     
  18. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^Ageed. In my opinion flow is the most important thing in a flow, then style. Noad, your stuff looks kinda forced with no overall flow. Try really simple letters like the old school writers did. Try to stay away from the really bubbly stuff like what you're doing now. Try something completely different.
     
  19. retro-one

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    Piece I made mostly to practice with some color fills, shitty letters and some filters and shit, will have more time now that schools over
     
  20. Sregor Gamsa

    Sregor Gamsa Member

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    Critics would be cool!

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