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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Exactly. Continue killin shit, back in the day, and continue asking us for help cause you suck. And please also continue throwin that great throwie on trains, looks great. While you continue doing that, ill continue sitting here deliverin paper.
    Mid life crisis got you shook huh?
     
  2. poopdick1er

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    If you've really been at it for that long and that's as far as you've been able to advance you should just throw in the towel lol.
     
  3. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    Foam just go simpler with piecing, do some straight letter type stuff and progress from there.

    Any crits on these would be cool
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  4. f0am0ne5

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    It aint a midlife crisis, i got back in to this cause it a way for me to keep my mind of shit while im deployed over seas. Instead of being snobby little dickheads critisize the shit and help out or just keep your mouths shut.
     
  5. hal.cyon

    hal.cyon Senior Member

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    Foam - Learn letter structure by using bars, do simples like the first few until you can progress. Go to the toy black book thread and learn stuff from the tutorials. I think what everyone's getting at foam is that throwing out a big number of years, 18, and not being able to piece don't exactly go hand in hand. If that's the case, we should expect your throwie and hand style game to be out of control, do you have examples of that work? Just being honest but some of those pieces you put up are just no good. Some of them were ok for 45 second quick drawings, but none were intermediate level.

    jerms - the last ones nice

    pics for talking

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  6. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Those time pieces look dope
     
  7. hal.cyon

    hal.cyon Senior Member

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    For my buddy sick.
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    hal.cyon Senior Member

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  9. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    look, its the internet you really posting some shit work and expect to get good feedback on it? really?
    if you can't look at your shit and be like oh fuck this looks fucking terrible compared to 100% of real writers, then you just dumb.
    try some other kinds of art, maybe you'll be better at those.

    jerms- why do you always use the ugliest colors? that R on the top one is good, i would work with that.
     
  10. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    @dank I thought they were ok colours:( lol I don't got many good colouring utensils.
     
  11. f0am0ne5

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  12. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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  13. Themysciran

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    Suburban, I think the colors just clash because they're all so bright and next to each other without any fade etc. maybe start with opposite sides of a color wheel and go from there if you are having difficulties. Some look a little like it was done with those nasty crayola markers. Get a couple nice paint pens and go from there. Also I like the bottom pic, minus the orange on it :) keep at it!
     
  14. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    Thanks themy for the advice i appreciate it, ima take a look at that color wheel.

    Foam try to simplify more, the letters look kinda wonky dude. Simply and go from there!
     
  15. Themysciran

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    Hal, I really like your stuff, they all look nice and the colors are great together
     
  16. hal.cyon

    hal.cyon Senior Member

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  17. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Nice fucken bars dude.
    Dude that looks so fucken dank, the coloring and fill look fucken amazing, so much detail. Holy shit dude lol.
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  18. Themysciran

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    Dank, the lettering looks great, but I can't get over the clean-up guy :D awesome touch.
     
  19. hal.cyon

    hal.cyon Senior Member

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  20. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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