^^^ That's cool. I would change that bottom of the S and straighten out the bottom on the K, also add a little 3D.
thanks bugs just went simple gone back to simples on tags and throws so thought i should probly do the same with my piece letters too View attachment 646374 added some 3d and some colour
Just drew these today... I'm aware that the letters need to be more smooth and they aren't really the same proportions on the blue one. But anything else you guys are thinking would really help me out a lot.. SHIT THEY ARE SIDEWAYS. oops
lykwid im feelin that blue throw the L is too big tho. here are some throws i did real quick i know theyre sloppy but looking for any crits
A few of those are looking half decent reks keep practicin. In that last photo the middle C is off , the bottom circle is not only too big for the top of the C, but also too big in comparison to the entirety of the throw. This is your problem with other letters on other throws, there's a few there where your starting to get it down I'm sure you can tell which
REKS7 Im diggin the 3rd throw it looks clean as hell but i would just say that some of the 7s are looking a little like Ds. So like on the shaded throw in the second pic I would try to make the upper part of the seven more of a tighter curve instead of it being gradual. Im not saying to slim it down just try to pull in the upper part of the 7s a little bit tighter. Thanks for the feedback man ill post some more in a minute.
cheers bugs id love to paint it but i aint got the best can control yet gonna keep hittin up the throws until i aint havin to correct it or im gettin em up real quick n precise
Truth some of the letters intersect with eachotet too much and the overal floe isn't quite there but just keep on drawing those simples over and over with minor simple tweaks and it will develope man! Keep at t That's looking alot better sek! I don't like that bottom bars of the e how it goes up so much but overal looking alot better sek. As for the can control just do what u said and do some throws in a private spot and even try some simples when u feel it Those 2 other posts should be in the throwie thread but you guys both get the concept of a throw just need to work on those letters! Keep at it Drew this at a friends and tryed something a littler different as someone suggested, tyred adding some more extensions and what not, I know it's still kinda similar to the other shit I posted and I know there's problems with it so crits would be appreciated.
Thanks baboo, I think I shouldn't have put that extension on the top right of s, after more practice il get the flow down a bit better hopefully
rumi im likin your throw the bottom left is sick but the i looks like an L to me... where you have that little extention coming out try makin that the top of the i then the top half the dot so its lower case see whatvit looks like other wise thats tight
Wrong thread^ Slightly better version i did the night before last one. Really need to fix the E Any tips appreciated
iv been playin with my letters starting from basic formation then molding them only problem i dont think they way each have turned out that they match each other View attachment 646376 [/URL] View attachment 646377 put them together.... and i kinda like it the s needs to be a bit closer or add some extentions in to close up the dead space what do you guys think? View attachment 646378
Cool coloring depth within the letters, looks like a pool of water in there. this is just preference, wish you also added those little skulls on the bottom left and used it it as an outline around your green outline, imo that'd be cool.
haha cheers zoup id they actually part of the notepad im using at the moment just found it layong around the house most of its used up from my 8 year olds drawings and shopping lists so im just using up the blank pages
sek the very top first picture ain't too bad, your letters are structured well and you've maintained the perspective of the word. good job, i'd say keep at it, get the whole structure perspective thing down pat then start working on getting a bit more flow between your letters. at the moment they are a bit harsh, and could probably use a little loosening up just getting a bit more flowy and stylish. but as I said, keep working on getting your structure and perspective down pat, you're doing well. lykwid your L doesn't seem to jive too well with the rest of the throw. i'm assuming it says lyk and something along the lones of that. imo your letters don't have the right structure or proportions and you need to focus on making sure they do. in your second pic the letters get smaller as you go along, so you've really gotta be focusing on keeping that structure and perspective throughout your word and letters. i would say try something more basic man, to get a feel for your word and your letters, cause all these little add-ons and whatnot is just making it harder for you to keep the shape to your letters. reks, im commenting on the first photo you posted: good job most of your throws you've kept that letter structure and you've kept your perspective throughout the word. your letters have some flow to them overall it's half decent man. i think what you've got to work on now is just cleaning it up a bit getting those basics i mentioned down solid which will inevitably tidy up your throw. germs i cant really fault that it's looking real nice. i mean its fresh honestly. i guess my only crit would be that the letters are different sizes as in the M is really wide in comparison to the E or R. the M and S look good together but even the G seems just a touch off in it's width. i dunno as I said it's looks real nice your letters are clearly well developed but just thought i'd try offer something constructive if i could. rumi thats nice man i love it. with the pink one (first photo) just remember to keep the perspective throughout your letters, like the R is pretty big in comparison to the other letters. again with the blue one (second phot), to me the R and U look good together but the M is too wide and it's smaller then the I is too big and too wide. your stuff is pretty clean though nice work in the third photo the one with your throws i love the bottom left one so clean and everything looks spot on man lookin sweet.