I like Suburban's advice. Keep doing simples, tweak em, and let things develop.

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P.S. I was nodding off every 2 minutes while drawing this. So weird. I'd wake up with my marker in the wrong section of the letter / 3D Thank god for white out....

 

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decided to have a go painting an E i came up with earlier as im itching to paint and i want to get my can control down

 

Thanks for thr crits truth i appreciate it
Thats looking alot better, just keep on drawing up stuff man

Sek the lines still look a little shaky and the e is kinda off but pretty nice shading for early attempts. Its good to experiment but keep it simple

 

@Lax that's a dope style man. I really like the first and second.

 

Painting a mural with the word "Design" sometime this week so crits would be appreciated

 

Grabs I think it would look better if the G was rounded at the bottom, the I didn't have the for and the N didn't have that small serif on the left just my opinion.

 

I feel you Loon, I'm not a fan of N's or I's..

More.. Crits welcome

 

First flows best and the last is the most consistent, I personally prefer the first

murder exchange really quick

 

@Semp You talking about the first on the second post? The pen one? and the steam/ooze type outline you did is fresh, I dig it

 

grabs that second post top one is dope

fuck semper i dont get how you got that good in such a short amount of time -.-

heres a late battle entry and 2 pen freehand doodles

 

That JE is cool in the bottom-most piece, shoulda kept the rest of the piece in that style^ M got way too big. R is awkward too, prolly woulda looked nice with a lowercase r. Looks like you just need to take your time/ put in all your effort and things will get cleaner and better

 

thanks for the tips mild i appreciate it

 

@Turban Mild with the good looks. I feel like you have crazy potential to drop fire pieces but you get lazy homie. Like in the Serial piece you should've continued the style all the way through but you simplified the I which threw it off for me. Just make sure you fully follow through with pieces and dont give up half way through and you're straight.

Random shit, heights are fucked, I know.

 

yo thanks grabs i appreciate that man. i was running outa room on the page so i just went with a simple small I but i hear what your saying man thanks

i think top one is best but the D just seems smaller then the other letters, its like that with your second too. the bends in your bottom N seem a bit off so keep playing around with that but overal looking good dude just keep on drawing!

 

Not sure where to post this anymore buts its an old piece I re-did in photoshop

'MIUNZ'

 

been away from the forum for a looong time. quick sketch up from today
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Phile learn some letter structure. That E is retarded

Some slaps

 

Phile youve gone with a shaped structure to keep your letters in and then just put that big ol' P where ever do what loon said stick to basic letter structure before you play with style.

anyways wasjust playing around before i go work. messing with some 3d and if you wondering where the six came from i googled sek and found 5 others so six was obvious choice. and it worked for this piece i think. i coloured with my kids crayola pencils and jeezus those things are solid haha need to get me some copics or somethin'
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