Can I get some crits on this throw Ive been messing around with. Does it flow or should I just scrap it?

 

@Cats fur dayz: What does that say? Keep hitting the paper.

@th3villian: 2nd pic bottom right is one you should work on.

@Panic: That looks pretty cool. Once you can perfect the letters it'll be a lot better.

@REKS: I say scratch that. If you can simplify the letters a little it might look better.

 

some trash outline of mine can somebody give some tips i dont like my g and the 50

 

^^^ Simply practice, practice, practice. Keep burning ink and paper.

 

Good stuff big 50. I hear that euro style is in now.

 

It says Slug lol yeah I figured I have a long way to go but I just wanted a first commentary on it before I go about making changes

 

had a some leftover paint that i thought i'd use, not particularly happy with the left part of the H and the bottom of the L

 

thanks ill keep at it

 

a couple of slaps any tips or comments?

 

@Big - Whats with the solid black above, but nothing below?

 

@phile stick to paper right now
@big like taro said wats with the black above? take out those arrows on the C in the SFC,

 

Big: Keep PRACTICING on paper.

Phile: Same thing practice on paper.

 

damn working on this throw has been frustrating. there's so much hot shit around my area looking at my stuff just makes it worse. anyway I reckon the two letter isn't half bad. crits would be appreciated I gotta work on developing something !!

 

i think the top one looks good but dude i think those highlights you try and add into the letters makes it worse, in a throw atleast. but thats just my opinion. i like that top R just keep practicing and keep all the bumps and stuff in your letters consistent with eachother.

 

Your H looks like a K.

 

crits?

 

I pass by your throwie on eglinton everyday...big ups

 

Thx bro,i will do so

Thx man !