^^Toy. Your letters need a lot of work. That arrow extensions aren't right, too many in wrong spots. The letters are overlapped weird and their shapes are not appealing. Simplify without all the extensions and arrows until you can get better letter structure.
tiger your going in the wrong direction man. if you had spent that year or so doing simples (starting with block/keyboard letters) you would have progressed much more. but thats ok, if i was you id stay away from all of that ^ and start with them keyboard letters and simples and then when you grasp basic letter structure and positioning then you start messing around bit by bit and develop a style! dont get discouraged keep practicing but honestly that stuff you posted is no good man! start with em keyboard letters! everyone starts off somewhere
Ouch. Coming from a 100% toy, I think it's not bad. If I saw that stuff laying around in my community, It would be pleasant to see, it wouldn't be amazing, but I think you get what I mean. You're definitely better than me.