throw is llooking sick loon

throw is looking sick germs + your exchange one too

 

I never really worked on throws, like ever. But now that im returning from my legal hiatus ive decided to focus on them some. This is my starting point. Pretty basic, nothing special.

 

@Phazr If you're gonna add that spiked bit on the P, id recommend doing the same on the R for symmetry. Besides that, looking good.

 

I find the throw looks pretty solid without the spike. I feel it might ruin the flow of the rest.

 

DA, forgot to do the shadow but yeah, crits?

 

i think that adding at least 2 more letters would help

 

Havnt been writing long, Gimmie your crits

 

@mits not bad but theres not much there to give crits on lol

@zeho get rid of the negative space between the letters and stop making your letters look distorted and expanded in weird ways. simplicity is key

random throw for talk

 

Love it grabs nice work man

 

@grabs ill try and get a better flick of another one of my throws, the distortion is just because the photo got expanded.

 

Lol a photo being expanded won't distort ur letters bro.

 

smugbraindead

 

This shits fire sir,run with it.

 

huge toy here, looking for any feedback. 2nd time trying to sketch out a possible throwie and i feel a lot more lost compared to tag handstyles which make more sense to me at the moment. With that in mind i just kept it simple.

 

looking through some pages, im clearly the bottom the ladder here, I can see my R definitely needs to get changed to something else.
still looking for tips to point me in the right direction, only tryna get better

 

Less white space, squish it together.

 

^^ For some reason that sounds dirty.

 

maybe I meant for it to sound dirty