I had to go with stoke on this one... solid piece.

 

Stoke gmv! Gotta love that double coloured outline!!!

 

Bugs gmv. Clear and legible.

@Stoke fill wise gmv, the S, O, E. letters felt weak, compared to others. was the T upside down? i couldn't see it.

 

@Stoke: Diggin' that piece bro. Only issues I see is the S, M and T. The T is hard to see and the S and M flow could have been a little better.

@Thundergunn: Not sure what to say. Keep practicing though.

@Zoup: Keep at it bro. You're getting that flow little by little.

My vote goes to Stoke.

 

Stoke won

 

Thanks for the crits, dudes! These helps a lot. I usually have some real struggle with the T lol. I didnt ve notice it was so difficult to read

@bugs :I think you should try with variable wides in the lines. I dont like that smoeth tag on the top
@thundergunn: Practice practice practice.The letter structure needs some work.
@zoup: That one looks better, you can complicate the colors much more. Do a canvas for smooth colors. And i have to say that tag needs some work and its too big for the piece

 

^^^ I know, I messed the tag. I'm a have to try the variable widths on the outline.

 

stoke gmv

 

Stoke gmv