i have an old treehouse that sometimes i like to write in when i cant go out..

 

Get rid of the halo. And go simpler.

 

jbk

 

bug sprying

 

bug spray

 

aiare calligraphy I never now what to write

 

http://imgur.com/bI5aeDL
Check it out guys, im new to the forum and i was trying something different with my tag yesterday and i got this result what do you guys think ?
Sorry for having the link but i wasn't able to upload it right !

Greetings from PT

 

Fucking awesome

Once used wd40 on a brick wall, similar effect

 

I dig it Daek!

Here's what I've been working on:

 

^^^ Not a bad start. Only issues I see are the E looks like an I, the R is not really visible, the loop within the O might look better a little higher, the 3 dots look out of place and the flow of the letters looks to stiff, you need to loosen your hand.

 

Thanks bugs, I'll keep at it!

 

crits? This is just a very rough sketch, I was just seeing what would come out. The O is obviously shit, it should be half the size

 

What's that even say. Do something legible first then experiment

 

the O and the N came out weird on this one, but I think it's pretty legible. Hont. I've filled a whole book with this tag, I've done it more legible already

 

You should go back to doing more legible letters... this is unreadable. i thought it said hoit or host. and that was after staring at it for a few seconds..

 

I'll be back with a cleaner one, and we'll see then

 

Crits on this please, the R is gash but I quite like the ILE, thinking it's an okay place to start developing, wondering if you guys agree?

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@Riue I think a dot over the i would help, sorta looks like its an extention of the R

Tried out my new streaker and squeezer