have a couple tries

 

I like the last one best sorry I did like 6 terrible sketches before this one hope you like it yo

 

My pieces are pretty weak.
BORE yo I like this one, looks solid http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=133121&d=1436060196

This post is so fucked, I don't know why it's showing things twice

 

^^^ Good start with the first one. The second one is just NO.

 

>>queez...good looks,,,yea i have trouble with the r/d spacing and connection too....not bad though
<<<phobos...keyboard/strate letter no curves stars or funny shit...and post a whole pic and stop being a self-conscious lil biatch

 

Sum old shit

 

cant wait to see the new shit

 

Whole pic for your highness
Someone has to explain to me, what does a toy do to progress past keyboard letters?

 

I like the middle one nice and simple keep that up that's how you get better

 

Just bring the right leg of your r down further too

 

And your shadow isn't consistent like it starts should be same through your e has exaggeration that's not needed

 

Anyone wanna do an exchange I wanna get nice with all letters haha

 

Not looking for crits.... just more.... fuck you guys.

 

Maybe u should post in tha intermediate thread cuz yo shit is fire...but not like inferno more like a burnt match

 

>>>ilikepie....Well at least you listen, that shit is not intermediate it is toy at best, go more simple and get yo structure right, it look like there is potential but those two sketches are not a good reflection and you need practice

 

@ilikepie: Fuck you too, buddy. Have a great day!

 

Sup im new here, joined years ago just to look at graffiti pix and figured its about time i tried my hand at it. been at it a week or so. crits would be dope on the ones with *s

 

^^^^ To be honest w/you I dont't like neither of them. I do appreciate you're starting out w/simple letters.
Ok, the S that is kinda ok is the 1st one w/the star. Try a complete basic simple S with nothing overlapping. The ULK all were bad, DO NOT overlap the tops of the U. Try a basic L and a simple K. Keep practicing and keep at it.