...travel,not ready for paint the R needs a lot of work keep it up

asur...looking good, bar consistency the right side of the A to small the U looks needs to be more uniform and the R too

 

By uniform do you guys mean everything level with each other

 

no they dont need to be the same height but the width needs to be closer to the same distance on the bars...look at the asur and you will see the different bars widths for a example or you can use the dictionary and find out what uniform means

 

View attachment 646936 not done with it but what y'all think I know the r is small it's what I was going for

 

Nothing to crit here. Good drawings on paper fellas. Keep hitting those books and someday you'll get to suck cope 2s shit out his asshole

 

^^^ That's graphic.

 

Fuckin with some extensions n shit. Fukkd up the 2nd o


Some random shit

 

lol

 

View attachment 646937

 

Gard that D is kinda small compared to the rest throws it off a bit. And asur those connections aren't working bro they look to forced.

Some more pen shit from work today. Had a sharpie doe got to outline it

 

Hey loon can you explain or give me a example

 

Your stuff is so dope. Huge fan of your style.

 

The top right of the A going into the S doesn't make sense of looks good. Then the way the U is just stabbing the R looks off too. And the extension on the R looks bad. Letter wise the A and S look decent need to work on the U and R more

 

Continuing on this, crits and adjustment suggestions are welcome

 

Great coloring books guise

 

Thanks loon

 

First post... Started writing again a week ago for the first time in 10 years.