@Quack Try keep all your letters balanced and around the same size, abit to muchi negative space for my liking too.
just some stuff from the last few months. Sorry some pictures are upsidedown. It's almost 1 am and I'm not trying to go back and flip all them now lol
@Quack loosen up a bit, keep practising, try just standard letters, the more you do it, you slowly find things to add to each letter. Just keep at it and don't give up
QUACs first on page is the best then his second is worse then holys is worst i know uve heard it before... make them look like keyboard letters... holy dont be giving any crits yet bud