Thanks! Didn't really know how to fill it and I fucked the bars up on the r and the m, dunno if I should add anything or not.

 

nice thanks man, liking those germ hands too. keep doing your thing!
ima start a holy but no promises if it will be up tonight

 

Thanks man! Sweet as, can't wait

 

Exchange I did for smok

 

@Germs looking good, I fuck with that bugs piece

 

nice loon, diggin that

Grabs that top one has sick flow, best one by far. keep it up man!

here's the exchange with holy

 

Yo that's sick!

 

Sloppy shit I did on the bus

 

Glad you like it holy

Banko cool style, I'm guessing you
Use sharpies or some kinda felt similar? I use those too for my shit but never for fills cuz it takes away from the letters, only a couple sharpies that are nice for fills which are lighter colours, keep doing your thing

 

Yeah I was using sharpies and random markers so looks pretty bad on a fill ,less color on this one

 

Banko, I think that shit is right on track.

C-c-c-c-crits, plz?

 

^^^^ Ok, the 1st page- it's hard to make out the word. The A looks like an R and the S looks like a weird D.
2nd page- not sure what it is.
3rd page- easier to read. Try the E on the top left corner instead, with 3 bars, it'll look better.
4th page- make the 2 middle lines on the E shorter. Not sure if that's an A, doesn't look like it. Also, the S looks
like a weird D.

 

Yeah eatsoe I can't see what it says but it's better than anything I could do lol.

 

Really sloppy fills with fading sharpies

 

Am I going somewhere?

 

I'll tell you what everyone will BURKY you need to work on your bars,structure of your letters they look a little disproportionate

 

tried to make it a lil cleaner KUSTO