H is unrecognizable. Go bigger. UseLess paint til your structures correct. Drop bubble background its a throw. Do hollow letters for dayssss

 

Its all pretty bad. Stick to paper for a while dog.

 

Word up homie. That's a terrible throw. Try to dumb it down to basic bubble letters

 

thanks for that, kick & loon.. that's pretty much why i went to the bAck of an abandoned bldg w/ that sloppiness
i would definitely like to re-style that H, so i'm glad you guys don't like it either. haha.
i only settled with the lower-case 'h' cuz it matched the rest of the letters' bubble more than any capital 'H' i scribbled down..
but that was weeks ago, and i got a fresh whiteboard marker @ work for me to kill time with on Monday.

 

Alright guys i got a New L. Crits?

 

Yo that's dope I never seen an L like that in a throw

 

Thanks my niqqa

 

I think it's dope, but I'm not sure how I feel about how blocky the bottom is. I'd curve it somehow?

Also, it's almost like you gave me shoutout <3

 

Crits?

 

my homie always is always seeing me in the cut

 

Like this? I tweaked the L.

 

shoulda done a simp at that spot kutso

 

Its a bit more complex then the rest of your letters. I dig it but if it wer me id tighten up the ET to balance it. Maybe blowup that ! To lettersize.

Or add somethin to you top T bar and youd have a fucking sickk throw


Also i agree w mild^. Spot looks chill dude make it pop

 

That's a long ass buff wall I just tucked my throw in the cut,didn't think it would ride out honestly or I would have did a straight letter

 

Travel, give crits to get 'em, but ditch the character in your e for starters.
kusto, I agree, go back and rock a simp right over that throw. Not that it's a bad throw, but take advantage of the space you got. I'm assuming it's a highway spot? Make it shine, cuz.
IBU, the bottom of that L is hot. I'd cut back on the T a bit, it dominates the space there.

 

wow someone is salty and trying to act cool

 

Yo flow you talkin to me or eats? You must be mistaken. And EATSOE and MILD your right kinda half assed the spot,challenged accepted clean shit comin soon

 

I don't think I'm good enough to give crits

 

Sorry about the image size
Over did it cause i was just playin round
Just after crits, The y is abit too big