Progress dog. Its got a ways to go still. Keep it up. Ur right its overboard. When the letters are bad its almost worse so done up and piece like. If that makes sence. Limit yourself to a light and a dark and knockout handfullls. Youreover investing.
Cant really give specific letter structure krits but like i said right direction from where you were. Kill the bottom heavy attempt. Go a bit bigger overall and space it out a bit. y crossbar should be like the H's height
i was just playing around cause i just got some alcohol markers, but thanks for the advice. Ill do one again tonight, i need to get back into the forums
Flow, you mean me? Salty bout what? If you mean because I said something that wasn't a hundred percent positive, that's how we improve. We ain't gone get no better if we just sit around and suck each others dicks. We all got ways that we can improve, and the reason I come here is to have those things pointed out. Crits aren't meant to knock each other down, they're meant to help us build ourselves up. These folks know that. They also know that if my crits are garbage, they can ignore them. Travel, you know what good graff looks like. Even if you can't execute the shit yourself you can give pointers. If folks that are better than you don't like them they'll ignore them. Giving crits, looking at some piece of graffiti in a critical light, can help you crit yourself, and you'll be better off for it. Give 'em to get 'em.
Loon is right. Ditch the points. Go for all round letters and for now try to keep the middle point of your letters dead center to your throw. make the middle of your b dead center and so on.
oh, well, geez, since ya put it tHat way, thanks for taking time away from those KING pieces you do to address this buTuhhhhhh.. that 'h' looks too balloon-animal'y.. very toy-like, IMO u DID hit it on the head the other day w/ making em equal in height, tho. the reason why i've abandoned some of the 'h' sketches i tried, especially lately (as shown by IDK's last pic) is that they get 2 lookin like nut-sacks, & that pic is complete with a few short 'n curlies too... haha i don't like the idea of incorporating dck-bags on my throw, tho, RT.
why dont you help them then also idk how youre talking about something looking toy when we all know what your throw looks like was just trying to help
and i appreciate that.. i can't give a crit on that tho, really? on a name that i write? wow even when all the crits you give are 90% insults and 9.9% unhelpful ? everyone's been telling you to fck off and here i was, trying to be civil.. oops. you aren't dope enough to hold your nose up that high, caillou.. go play photo peek-a-boo somewhere else
Just ignore that little punk ass toy. He obviously is just stickin around to start shit. IDK, if you was tryin to be a part of this forum, I'd look right over your first appearance here. I mean, we all need a chance to grow, but you're just causin shit to cause it. You give no helpful crits on top of only givin crits to folks who are obviously toy af, like on a just startin' out level. This is the last time I'm even gonna acknowledge that you're even posting here unless you actually put some effort into being part of the community. Go post your shit in the regular graff forums if you're so fucking big. Battle, act like a human, or gtfo, come on, seriously.
lol i knew a girl named AMY once... "gangbang-amy" we used to call her... a ReaL dumb bitch... just like you