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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    How about you grasp the concept of a straight letter.
     
  2. Sir_Bad_A_Lot

    Sir_Bad_A_Lot Member

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    ai67.tinypic.com_setz61.jpg
    is this any better or shall i keep it more simple?
     
  3. m00py

    m00py Member

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  4. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Listen to this guy ^^ he's been writing for like 2 weeks and is better than u cuz he can pull off a straight letter

    Try something like this. Took me 2 minutes

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  5. Sir_Bad_A_Lot

    Sir_Bad_A_Lot Member

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    hey at least I tried lol
    ai66.tinypic.com_28ja694.jpg

    btw thanks loonai i will:D
     
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  6. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    the drop shadows off my niqqa.

    If the letters curving the shadow should have a curve too, not a sharp edge
     
  7. Sir_Bad_A_Lot

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  8. m00py

    m00py Member

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    BURKY, seriously, stop doing that shit and start doing simple straight letters. Your keyboard? Copy those letters EXACTLY like they are til you get your shit down then SLOWLY progress from there. Quit being stubborn or forever be a toy.

    Just did this. I feel like I hit something with it:

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    This woulda been so much better if I thickened both bars on the L. Rats.

    Bs intimidate me.
     
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  9. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    That A is hot. L and E not so much. Put more into the B and M.
     
  10. Sir_Bad_A_Lot

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    @Moopy -As u can see the last one does not have much difference with the one loonai posted to show me how it should look like,I just added shades...And I did one with the keyboard letters so please......
     
  11. m00py

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    It is so different! And the "keyboard" letter one you did isn't keyboard! It still has style! You don't need to be styling if you haven't done boring keyboard shit yet. Your bars aren't just uneven - they're not even there. You may think that the little tweaks you're doing isn't a lot but it is and it's too much for where you're at right now.

    I mean EXACT REPLICATIONS of the keyboard font. Bar thickness, proportions, and spacing. Letter-drawing realism. For real.
     
  12. Sir_Bad_A_Lot

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    Well man u could say it like that in the first place,why are u getting so mad?I love writting and I love graffiti,trying to get better,thats why I joined this forum
     
  13. idkwhattodowithmyhands

    idkwhattodowithmyhands Senior Member

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    stop with the shadow
    just do it exactly like loon did
    stop rounding your letters and shit to
    every letter should be made up of bars, get that down and then you can experiment in the future
     
  14. m00py

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    Because I and a lot of other people HAVE been telling you this, but each crit is followed up with you ignoring what we're telling you with a picture of some more wrong shit. If you love writing graffiti then you'll be willing to work hard at it. It isn't all a no sweat operation. You have to do hard work at basic letter structuring before you can begin to bend and style your letters. You're not gonna produce funky killer shit in no time, and it's only gonna take you longer to get there - if ever - the more you try to run before you can crawl.
     
  15. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    A straight letter will always look better than shitty structure and wack letters

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  16. m00py

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    Trying to push. May have overdone it but I feel I learned a lot with this one. Let me know what y'all think.

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  17. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    I like it blame. The M needs some cleaning up but that E came out real nice
     
  18. m00py

    m00py Member

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    Yeah the M needs cleanup for sure. And the L is still a little weak despite the bend and extension. But I am proud of the E for sure :) Thanks
     
  19. drapes1125

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    burky thats about whow i drop it.and kust is fresh.eats ill as ever keep it up because when i look at your art work i go through a set of emotions leading to a visual orgasm.you might as well just draw the best sex ever lmao omfg.
     
  20. eatsoe

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    @ Drapes, lol preciate it, but this is the shit I cum to
    https://scontent.cdninstagram.com/t...35/10520234_1638667876411031_1194627462_n.jpg
    My shit is light years behind, lmao. That and 42, TM, UH all them cats. KOG, MSK, 28K, MSG, ICR, LTS, so on and so on, lmao.

    @Loon, where the fuck do I recognize that character from??? I know it and as soon as you say it I'm gonna be kicking myself. Also, you or demo doing those chars?

    Blame, that M is shitting the whole thing up. "People are always going to focus on the weakest shit in your piece." Some good advice from a friend of mine.