Yo eats I got your exchange finished imma send it with your pack

 

The top part was my new tag that i was working on... it sucks lol
The middle was me just practicing normal keyboard letters. (What should I do after I perfect them?)
The last part was my throwie style.
Crits plz

 

Its good youre practicing all three forms, you dont wanna be one of those niqqas who only practice tags and throw ups like me, Because of that my evolution is off, but fuck it. Practice makes perfect. Regarding your tag, looks like you tried to add too much style, go simpler for now cause those styles are bad.

 

The thing is. For me coming up with a decent tag is so hard! Idk what to do..

 

Make it simpler. You can also try lower case..

Also with your throw; It doesn't look too bad IMO, is the last letter meant to be an E?

 

the last letter is a E lol

 

i know yu are going for symetry, imo i think turning the P around and working with it (p) wil help break through to the next level.... the inner line and outer line work needs way more repitition...idk its ma 2 cent keep it up

 

The structure of the p is so distorted it doesnt look like a p. Looks like your P needs work homie.

 

I hate when people sacrifice letter structure just for the sake of symmetry...
ZOUS

 

I feel it, that is an S. Got lazy with it

 

zoup as in from MG?!? SUP

 

RESP! missed you homie. Welcome back

 

Some randomness in the blackbook from jus now

 

the last simple, the lew is nice but that N sucks just fix that and i think its good. E's pretty hidden but it still works

 

Yea my Ns are pretty shit gotta work on them. Here's another shitty n

 

Most of yall should be painting and posting I'm the intermediate thread. Good work fellas

 

Crits please

 

lol