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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. a_priori_states

    a_priori_states New Member

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    Fair enough. I'll stick to slaps threads then.
     
  2. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    You know there's already a "T" in "states" right? What's the point of covering the T with a T? Also, that's not very pleasing to the eye. Like, at all. Looks like a kid got a hold of postal stickers and scissors....might wanna rethink everything.
     
  3. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    All the hands I currently fuck with. Can anyone drop some pointers on a direction to go in with any of these?
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  4. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ All looks cool homie. The only one you might wanna change a little is the A on the middle one.
     
  5. MRDJ

    MRDJ Member

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    Top left is dope. I'm not one to give Crits, but IMO the others are pretty hard to read(to the general public), still sick though
     
  6. TOLR8

    TOLR8 Senior Member

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    20160316_151755.jpg what i usually use
     
  7. ekstc

    ekstc Member

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    User, i like middle best but id change S to more round so it fits. Just my opinion
     
  8. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    User, kill that underline out on the bottom one. The extra doodads on the U are bad, imo. THe E on the bottom is the only one I like. Your R's need work and the star is bad. Your Top addon needs more consistency.
     
  9. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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  12. TOLR8

    TOLR8 Senior Member

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    Some one liner stuff and different Rs
     
  13. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    Those top U's look too much like O's. Looks lazy.
     
  14. TOLR8

    TOLR8 Senior Member

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    The whole thing or the top u's
     
  15. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    The top U's, cousin. Keep it up, though. Post more.
     
  16. TOLR8

    TOLR8 Senior Member

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    20160318_230805.jpg been fuckin with one liner stuff nostly
     
  17. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    eatsckbnewtag.jpg The U looks like a Z Try to get your E more round or oval-like? I dislike your lower case r's. The S looks like it could travel but it's hard to discern it as what it is. And, getting way down deep, use your page space better. idk, I talk a lotta shit for doing what I do so do your thing.
     
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  18. ekstc

    ekstc Member

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    USER, your U looks like Z too much
     
  19. ekstc

    ekstc Member

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    also, to see how your S tilts, you also need every letter to follow or it looks out of place

    like consistent letter style, ya know?
     
  20. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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    Eats those scribbles are flame.