Well your letters are just spaced weird. I think you should start with simple letters. Right now you're trying too hard. Just do what NAWK is doing. Look at his simple tag structure
Taking a few steps back would be a good idea. Lose any add ons like arrows or dots and focus on letters. Keep it simple and legible, the closer to keyboard letters the better. Keep writing that way until you're sick of it, then do some more. It sucks, but simple is the only way to learn how you can change letters and still keep them letters. Just keep at it. And thanks for the crit, I noticed that when I finished (about the k looking like an r), but at that point it's too late to change anything. Just something to remember not to do next time
Go back to simple keyboard letters for now. Work on making your letters all the same proportions and making them even. Don't try adding any flair til you can do a simple style
First ever handstyle. What do you guys think is bad/not bad about it? I'm curious to see how terrible it is.
what HandS said, but i like the symmetry of the letters... the "A" balances well w/ "K" at the end, as does the roundness of the "B" in the beginning balancing w/ the roundness of the "S" at the end. i imagine some nice pieces could come out of a letter combo like this.
Also, I just noticed this, your letter spacing on the A, B & E is close together but then the S & K get further apart. Tighten it all up. And echo is right man, those are some good letters in a good combination. The E has a really nice balance to the letters. Nice work. Just practice.
You only say that because I'm new to the game. Probably intimidated that someone can have half decent hand without practicing as long as you.
I'm hella stoked to hear that someone could tell I was shooting for symmetry. Thanks for the criticism.