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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Flow-->

    Flow--> Senior Member

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    Idk about this piece.. something doesn't feel right about it.

    CRITS???

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  2. Flow-->

    Flow--> Senior Member

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    Yea.. I woke up this morning thinking damn I think that piece is wrong and I might just have to do some straight letters for the battle. But lets just call this a experimental piece lol.
     
  3. DEUCE2

    DEUCE2 Senior Member

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  4. R3TCH3D

    R3TCH3D Senior Member

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    That's pretty good deuce the u looks way better
     
  5. DEUCE2

    DEUCE2 Senior Member

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  6. DEUCE2

    DEUCE2 Senior Member

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    that shit looking tight bruh
     
  7. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    S sorta looks like a P to me
     
  8. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    @AlCap looks sick, my only crit is the S, kinda looks like a P. Other than that good outline.

    @pushdamop, im feeling the flow on the Blue R in the 2nd picture, if you can figure out that flow, that'd look awesome.

    @Deuce that green piece looks almost wall ready, the D is dope.

    2nd serch sketch, goddamn cannot do fills to save my life, gave up haha.
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  9. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    That dot effect off the S and ! Is cool. I might bite that from you later. Not in the SERCH piece tho.
     
  10. PushDaTempo

    PushDaTempo Member

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    I deleted my post so you know. The seccond one was good the first one sucked.
     
  11. TheHoly

    TheHoly Senior Member

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    Not sure how I feel about this one,, would appreciate crits on what to improve 0602161719e.jpg
     
  12. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    Little funky...the extensions connecting the letters really don't make sense. I mean structurally the letters are kind of good, however I think that the serifs are out of proportion, like they don't follow the bar structure. Not really a bad attempt I suppose, but it looks like you're trying to progress faster than you actually are. Just slow down bro.
    I've said this before to others and now I'll say it to you...do you like graffiti? Of course you do. Do you wanna get good at it? I bet. So be prepared to put in the work and the time it takes to even get remotely decent. Art ain't a race, it's gonna take you years before your skills are even remotely decent. I'm still learning man and I've been doing this for like 10+ years. The first few years you're just gonna suck...that's part of it. Don't get discouraged, just keep drawing. Slow down, practice the basics, attempt a piece every now and then, whatever...but the more straight letters and bubble letters you do, the more you'll understand structure. Tags tags tags. Keep at it man.
     
  13. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Looks terrible holy
     
  14. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    Lewn! Let's see your latest stuff. Whatcha been working on?
     
  15. kickiticy2

    kickiticy2 Senior Member

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    holy widen bars. lose connections, and extentions. forget intrakitt fills.

    do that and come back playa!
     
  16. always crushin

    always crushin Moderator

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    What up everyone it's been awhile easy to forget bout this site when life's hectic anyways just sum ish don't got much pics on this phone received_10154384507790244.jpeg
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  17. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    What do you write man? That looks dope.
     
  18. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Awww snap, welcome back crushin. Dope work as always.
     
  19. always crushin

    always crushin Moderator

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    Thanks guys appreciated top one says slaughter I write slaughter/slotr kws
     
  20. VerceVisa

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    Practicing letter structure. Constructive crits are appreciated.
     

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