Yeah im shetching something for the monk battle now, which is kinda weird since one of my mates used to write monk

 

lept your throw is looking just as bad as always

stem stop that color shit and do a better throw

phazr that taller philly throw style looks awful, especially when painted

 

do round letters
idk why you guys always try and make all of your tops the same wierd pointy box shape it looks awful

 

You guys try so hard at throwies lol. Keep it simple it's probably the easiest part of the game

 

Not the best throw,, but I thought i would share to get some crits.
Only painted it to cap some of my reaal old shit ahah

 

aint bad. I don't like that H very much. I'm feeling the Y. Looks a little cramped though. Maybe pop that bottom circle out more. haha twerk it a bit.
just my 2 cents.

 

i actually fuck with that throwie, u just need a bit more technique tbh, the filling isnt that good and the outline could have been better in some places. But its not bad at all.

 

A and E are poop

 

It's all shit lol. Trying way too hard

 

crayons

 

Needs to be simpler and drop the heavy tops, balance it better in my opinion. Keep at it dude

 

Is the upper case e better or worse?

 

It could work but you're going in the wrong direction bro. Your L still could look too much like a C. The E is eh...I mean look at other throwies with the letter E for some good examples. Your P and T are still not improving much. No offense bud, just need to keep working at it. But so do my throwies.

 

Ok thanks hands

 

First part of the H isn't supposed to be as oval any crits would be appreciated

 

Cut out that wave thing tou have on the top right of all the letter and just keep it round and have a round O.

Some random throws in my book

 

seriously just do round tops and that will be so much better

 

Thanks yo, will try get that down today

 

So I have been working with my throwies a bit and for now these are the only two things that have potential. And I have been stuck with these 2 for a few months and everything I try to change looks like shit.
I have serious writers block.
CRITS??

 

make your letters more rounded

 

I rounded the letters and they look much better imo. But I looked back to some advise that Hands gave me about looking through the whole throwies thread and finding ideas and stuff. I'm trying some new things now like the one on the bottom.